Wilson/Chase drabble [rivers_bend]

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Title: Jealousy
Pairing: Wilson/Chase, House/Wilson implied
Words: 111
Rating: R

kohl_rimmed_eye mentioned wanting W/Ch balcony sex where maybe House saw them. This sprang fully formed and unbidden into my head.

When House noticed the single blond hair stuck in the frame of Wilson's balcony door, he didn't even have to close his eyes to picture the whole scene. Chase pressed up against the glass, back curved, head tilted back, hair tangled in Wilson's fingers as Wilson assaulted his face and throat and lips with teeth and tongue.

Chase's tie pulled loose, shirt unbuttoned from the collar, wanton groans spurring Wilson on. House saw Wilson's tidy hair disrupted as Chase pushed him downwards, Wilson fumbling with ugly shirt tails and Chase's belt. Wilson licked and sucked and surely swallowed, no one that tidy spits, and Chase arched his hips as he came.

Mood::

exhausted

Music:: Jeeves & Wooster S3:6

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There are 33 comments on this entry. (Reply.)

I've already told you that I think this is lovely, but I'm just commenting to say that whenever you use your "ouch I broke my OTP" icon in comms and stuff my name always comes up somewhere, and I am both guilty and honoured :D

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I am both guilty and honoured

Well, it's quite gratifying to expand my horizons. You should concentrate of feeling honoured and pleased.

Besides, Ch/W seems to get good ~~crack~~ comments, which always makes me very happy.

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~~That is because it is practically the definition of crack fic. Unlikely and hot.~~

*is rapidly running out of W/C plotbunnies, which is worrying*

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I refuse to believe that you will ever really be out of W/Ch plot bunnies.

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I think it was when I started writing my

fanfic100 set twice over that I started running into problems ;)

I'm writing other stuff to amuse myself until my brain starts working again. But if you ever get any W/Ch ideas you know where to poke them :D

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am I correct in inferring from that that you are writing 200 W/Ch fics?

my goodness.

well I apologise for stealing your W/Ch plot bunnies then. You should keep them all for yourself!

The reason your name always comes up is that I can only write them with your prompt.

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Not quite. I'm writing 100 Chase/Wilson fics, only one of the fics happens to be made up of 95 moments, all of which are at least drabble length. So, 195 if you want to be entirely accurate ;)

And I handed that plot bunny over because I can't write smut, so the balcony thing was out. ~~for the moment~~

*shines* *happy grin*

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Well, smut I can do. W/Ch is slightly more difficult. but I do endeavour to make you happy. :)

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Aw. *grin* *hugs*

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oooh! pretty! i love that you built a whole scene and underlying feeling in so few words!
(and i love your 'ouch i broke my otp icon)

Thank you, and thank you :)

I love trying to fit whole stories into so few words, I'm glad I managed.

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Wilson licked and sucked and surely swallowed, no one that tidy spits ...

Perfect line, describing Wilson to a t.

Ouch.

I'm glad it works. Writing at 4am, I'm never quite sure :)

Poor House.

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You know, when I saw Kohl's post, my first instinct was also to write some smut for her, even though smut is not really my forte.

The thing that makes this for me is the though 'no one that tidy spits', it's the kind of snarky thing that you know would pass through House's mind.

On another note, I covet your 'I broke my OTP' icon. Look! I made a knock-off!

Would you mind terribly if I used it? I promise to give you all due credit for the catchphrase. ^_^

~Djinn

Do you too wonder what it is about her that makes everyone around her fall over themselves to do her bidding? ;)

and of course I don't mind if you use it. I do not feel copyrighty about the phrase *giggles*

'no one that tidy spits',
The original line there was he never spits, but I decided that I didn't want to make it so clear that House and Wilson were together. I loved that just changing those few words changed the whole tenor of the fic.

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I think you made the right chose. In addition the ambiguity it lends, the line gains a sort of tongue-in-cheek snark to it with the mention of tidiness.

Kohl has amazing mystical powers. I can only hope that she does not use them for evil. (Although maybe she is already using them for evil, and I've just failed to notice.)

~Djinn

And hey, where's my 3corners beta? *pokepoke* *bounces impatiently*

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of course she's using them for evil! I've written not one, not two, but three Ch/W fics now! ;)

But if I had mystical powers I think I might use them for all sorts of things, so I can't help but forgive her. :D

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Looks like House had a pretty good idea of what was going on here. XD

*laughs* and that "Ouch, I broke my OTP" icon concept is great. (Heck, I know I always end up doing the same thing, but that's probably because I'll write pretty much any pairing.)

I never ever ever wrote anything but House/Wilson. until that

kohl_rimmed_eye got her little W/Ch hooks into me ;) so I had to make the icon in her honour :D

Thank you for reading and commenting!

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EEEEEEEEEE!!!! You are so hot when you write on the dark side. Not a feather of fluff in sight. :)

~~I am your father, Luke~~

Glad you like. I do like feathers though. Just sometimes :)

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Oh yeah. A little angst and a whole lot of YUM! Gorgeous visual. ::Drools::

A little angst and a whole lot of YUM

What a perfect description of a smut drabble! :D

Thank you!

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Oh, wow yes.
*toddler fists of glee*
House's biting tone is perfect.

I made toddler fists of glee come?

YAY!

Thank you :D

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Wilson licked and sucked and surely swallowed, no one that tidy spits

I love the bitterness seeping through in that observation. Gorgeous. Also, Chase/Wilson is surprisingly hot. Hotter than Wilson/Chase, I think. Damn it, between you, you and Karaokegal are turning me into a major Chase fan..!

The thing about Chase is that on the show he still isn't all that interesting to me. But fanon has him so wanton and pansexual that he is damn fun to write once you get started. And he does have those pouty lips and floppy fringe that make him do hurt so easily.

Poor boy's always on his knees though, so I thought he should get a chance to stand for once.

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Ahhh, how can 111 words be so hot?

Balcony sex IS great. There needs to be more of it in the fandom. (...isn't that why they decided to have House and Wilson's balconies randomly connect in the second season anyhow?)

I can see the memo from Fox now.

Dear set designers,

More balcony sex required. Please connect House and Wilson's balconies as soon as possible.

Thank you,
TPTB@FoxStudios

Hehe! Glad you liked, and thank you for commenting :D

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OK, so I'm finally catching up. How can I rigorously hang onto my "Chase really isn't a dark character, just misunderstood" attitude if you keep doing this?

I have a confession. When reading fiction, I like to see it in my head. I never can make House/Wilson work. This, I can see. You are corrupting my Aussie. And I like it.
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I'm not sure wanting Wilson to pin you up against a door and make you shake makes you a dark character, just human ;) Even I can see that...

I'm glad you like it anyway, even if you think I'm corrupting the poor boy

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Gorgeous, as always, my dear, but I love how this can be read in two completely different ways - where it actually happened, or where it's just House's paranoid delusion. As you know, I happen to ~~know~~ prefer the second version to be true, but it is absolutely amazing how either one works perfectly. And others have said it, but I will repeat, that the line "no one that tidy spits" is absolutely perfect - so wry, so bitter, so perfectly House, but at the same time, so true - so perfectly Wilson! Plus I must confess that the whole thing is completely hot, even if I hate the pairing. :p

The challenge of a drabble is that every word has to be exactly perfect, there's no room for error at all, which rather terrifies me. You make it look easy. I am, as always, in awe of your talent.

*blushes* You are so very kind and lovely :)

I love the challenge of drabbles. Even if sometimes I don't keep it to exactly 100 words. It is so satisfying to tell a whole story in that tiny space.

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