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Title: Snapping back like a Rubber Band
Pairing: Adam/Tommy (high school AU)
Words: 270
Rating: R
The Obvious: I do not know any of the people whose public personas are used in this story and neither believe nor mean to imply this actually happened.
Warnings/Enticements: adolescent sexuality
A/N: This is another POV swap, this time for Stretching All the way from Here, which while I thought it was a complete fic when I wrote it, is now actually the beginning of a 47k+ WiP that will someday be finished.
Summary: Tommy thinks about Adam when he jerks off.



He doesn't even have to think about Adam doing anything, and he's still the best wank fantasy Tommy's ever had. Doesn't have to think about the look of surprise on Adam's face every time Tommy kisses him, like he can't believe Tommy wants to, doesn't have to think about the way the span of his hand can cover Tommy's whole dick and balls, heat up his belly inside and out. He doesn't have to remember the sounds Adam makes when Tommy bites his lips, or the way he shook when Tommy had him pinned up against that tree. There's no need for Tommy to dwell on the thick-salt taste of Adam's spunk, or the way Adam licks it out of Tommy's mouth, humming softly, fingers kneading Tommy's hip and the back of his neck. He doesn't have to picture Adam's mouth on his dick, or Adam's hands peeling open his jeans. He doesn't need to imagine anything at all.

The pillowcase he hid so his mom wouldn't wash it still smells a little of Adam's cologne, and his t-shirt still smells of the pot they smoked, and all Tommy needs is the twist of fabric pressed to his face, and a hand on his dick, and he's coming, just the idea that Adam is out there, maybe thinking about Tommy, too, enough to make him shiver with aftershocks.

After, lying in bed, legs and eyes heavy, satisfied buzz under his skin, that's when Tommy remembers. That's when he dreams.
There are 17 comments on this entry. (Reply.)
 
posted by [identity profile] red-adam.livejournal.com at 07:18am on 15/05/2011
Oh yes! A work in progress you say? Of course I had to go back and re-read the original too. I will be a jibbering wreck when you post that. And I love today's snippet. There's something about teenage horny boys who are horny for each other rather than girls. Gets me every time. I'm not nearly so keen on teeneage het boys!
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 02:09am on 16/05/2011
I will be a jibbering wreck too, I expect :D

I think you'll like the fic I'm posting in a bit. Another, totally stand-alone high school AU. I'm addicted!

Thank you, bb!
 
posted by [identity profile] casey270.livejournal.com at 05:29pm on 15/05/2011
i loved the first one & i love this. if this is a peek at what's to come, i can't wait.

you wrote HS angst so well in Stretching All the Way from Here. i love reading both their POVs.

i'm looking forward to the long, angsty, thinky WIP.
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 02:10am on 16/05/2011
It will definitely be long, and it's definitely porny. Hopefully the angst will satisfy, too :D :D

Thank you!
 
posted by [identity profile] thrace-adams.livejournal.com at 05:45pm on 15/05/2011
Oh this I like this and I especially like the part where it's part of a larger fic \0/ WOOO HOOOO
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 02:11am on 16/05/2011
hahaha omg SO. MUCH. LARGER. I've never written anything like it. I'm so glad you're excited for it, bb!
 
posted by [identity profile] thrace-adams.livejournal.com at 06:50am on 16/05/2011
YAY WOO HOOO LONG FIC - um...happy ending tho I hope??? *hides*
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 07:02am on 16/05/2011
Lololololol, bb, I cannot write sad to save my life. It pretty much is gonna be 40k words of sex and maybe 10-15k words of parent angst or best friend angst or drama club drama to pad it out... Not that there's no story arc for Adam and Tommy, just that it doesn't come in the form of misunderstandings or fights or whatever. I am the schmoop queen. :D
 
posted by [identity profile] thrace-adams.livejournal.com at 08:09am on 16/05/2011
WOOO HOOOOO *twirls and throws confetti over the angst free zone* You have NO IDEA how happy you've made me :DDDDDDDD
 
posted by [identity profile] firiel77.livejournal.com at 08:34pm on 15/05/2011
Oh yeah, for Wip! I will wait every so patiently for you to write it and then my head may explode. I love your cocky Tommy in this verse.
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 02:12am on 16/05/2011
I love cocky tommy SO MUCH. And he's SO cocky, and scared, and daring and fucked up and awesome. *breathes*

I might be a little bit excited, too :D

Thank you!
 
posted by [identity profile] firiel77.livejournal.com at 06:00pm on 16/05/2011
Yes! I love how he's kind of edgy and quirky and you don't really know what the hell is going on in his mind. Poor Adam.

I'd LOVE to see how this unfolds. Lol, no pressure though. :D
 
posted by [identity profile] yukisherry.livejournal.com at 06:12pm on 16/05/2011
UNF. more?
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 11:22pm on 02/06/2011
There will be more for the next round of LBB :D
 
posted by [identity profile] yukisherry.livejournal.com at 07:46am on 03/06/2011
OMG YES!!!!!!!!!!!11
 
posted by [identity profile] fairfax-verde.livejournal.com at 01:59am on 18/05/2011
OMG wat? 47k WIP? \o/ I loved that story, the lip ring fic :) This was a very lovely, very hot little ficlet that only makes me anxious for more!
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 11:22pm on 02/06/2011
More will be coming :D

Thank you!

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