kissing with teeth

[rivers_bend]

In the wake of my assumptions about the neck-kissing in karaokegal's latest RPS chapter, she challenged me to write a neck biting fic.

So, I did.

Title: Bite
Words: 300
Rating: Adult (f/f)


I use my lips to kiss your mouth, the soft warm skin inside your elbow, the crease at the back of your knee. Your cheekbone, eyebrows and nose, all feel the press of my lips.

For your neck, however, lips aren't enough. I kiss with my teeth, plucking at the skin until you moan and tilt your head and then, sealing the oval of my mouth against your heat, I let you feel my bite.

The skin there is thin, and there's a world outside these walls where you are busy and important, so I'm careful not to mark you there. The twin curves of my teeth will fade before I'm done with you, but you and I will both know they were there.

The skin on your shoulders is thicker, and under your clothes, so I may bury my teeth deeper, take the measure of your flesh, test it. I can drink the taste of you in, not just lick, but suck the essence of you into my throat.

If I lay you out beneath me, my hipbones pressing into the curve of your ass, breasts feeling the angles of your shoulder blades, I can make you come just with the play of my mouth.

I slide my hands down the length of your arms until our fingers intertwine and you are mine completely. I wet your skin with my tongue and blow, just to feel you shiver. When I kiss you there, in that triangle between shoulder, neck and spine, you are tense with anticipation. I shush against your skin.

More kissing and you start to squirm and beg, which makes me desperate, but I still wait, biting, tasting, but not marking. Not until you're nearly weeping with need, and then I suck us both over the edge.

Comments

[tigertrapped.livejournal.com]

Love this - your flist should challenge you more often. *g*

For some reason, it's this line I love best, perhaps because it grounds us in a reality outside the fic:

The skin there is thin, and there's a world outside these walls where you are busy and important, so I'm careful not to mark you there.

[rivers-bend.livejournal.com]

Challenge me, I'm yours *g*

That grounding in reality is what is important to me, so I am pleased to hear it comes across.

Thank you.

[kohlrimmedeye.livejournal.com]

*guh*

Can't read her latest RPS chapter cuz of spoilers, but I'm very glad I can read this. This is gorgeous. I really have no other words.

Just gorgeous. :)

xx

[rivers-bend.livejournal.com]

Thank you! I'm glad you like it. It makes me extremely happy. I'm very happy you can read it as well *g*

xx

[talia-sparkle.livejournal.com]

ooh! *shivers*

That was very nice indeed.

[rivers-bend.livejournal.com]

Thank you *g*

xx

[talia-sparkle.livejournal.com]

This bit:

If I lay you out beneath me, my hipbones pressing into the curve of your ass, breasts feeling the angles of your shoulder blades, I can make you come just with the play of my mouth.


was especially nice! Conjures all sorts of lvoely images!

[dontkickmycane.livejournal.com]

Well, I'd say you met that challenge rather hotly - I mean handily. I agree, I liked the bit where you gave just that little bit of outside reality.

I'm just going to bask in your greatness for a bit if that's ok. ;P

[rivers-bend.livejournal.com]

Bask away, my dear. *g*

*is blushing*

thank you!

[timbershiver.livejournal.com]

Oh this is lovely - I have a HUGE thing for neck kissing (doing it, having it done to me and reading about it) - mmmmmmm!

[rivers-bend.livejournal.com]

Thank you :D

and ditto on the neck kissing thing ;)

[victorian-tweed.livejournal.com]

I'm yet another neck kissing fan, and my stars that was HOT.

I may need a little lie down now.

[rivers-bend.livejournal.com]

It's hard to go wrong with neck-kissing, I find. hope you had a good lie-down ;)

[diachrony.livejournal.com]

Ummmmm ... neck. Guh.

The skin there is thin, and there's a world outside these walls where you are busy and important, so I'm careful not to mark you there. The twin curves of my teeth will fade before I'm done with you, but you and I will both know they were there.

And I *love* this. Evidence of unselfish care beyond the immediate passionate craving ... revs up the heat oh, so much more ...

[rivers-bend.livejournal.com]

Thank you! Just exactly what I was going for.

Happy to provide the neck-lust *g*

[karaokegal.livejournal.com]

Not much I can add to adulation, except that (of course) YOU ROCK!

[rivers-bend.livejournal.com]

I got sock-monkey! *g*

thanks hon.

[pipry23.livejournal.com]

I love how in one sentence, the very first sentence, you take me from her mouth all the way to the back of her knee. *shivers*

I kiss with my teeth

Buh.

suck the essence of you into my throat.


LKAJSDLKJASD YOU.sldknfasf...PRETTY. AND HOT.

I can make you come just with the play of my mouth.


iiiii...oh my god.

I shush against your skin.


MMM I love the use of the word shush. So unexpected and gentle but sensual.

Not until you're nearly weeping with need, and then I suck us both over the edge.


ghaosgnalkjasldkfj this is so gorgeous. you are crazy talented, my god. um *fans self* guh. *goes to next one*

[rivers-bend.livejournal.com]

Thank you sweetie! *does happy dance*

your comments are gorgeous. And so are you.

*tackle-glomps*

[deansam67.livejournal.com]

GUH.

Yup, that's all I've got.

[rivers-bend.livejournal.com]

I always forget about this one. mmmmmm neck biting... *smooches* thank you, baby!

[deansam67.livejournal.com]

You know how I feel about neck biting. Damn you *g*