In the wake of my assumptions about the neck-kissing in
karaokegal's latest RPS chapter, she challenged me to write a neck biting fic.
So, I did.
Title: Bite
Words: 300
Rating: Adult (f/f)
I use my lips to kiss your mouth, the soft warm skin inside your elbow, the crease at the back of your knee. Your cheekbone, eyebrows and nose, all feel the press of my lips.
For your neck, however, lips aren't enough. I kiss with my teeth, plucking at the skin until you moan and tilt your head and then, sealing the oval of my mouth against your heat, I let you feel my bite.
The skin there is thin, and there's a world outside these walls where you are busy and important, so I'm careful not to mark you there. The twin curves of my teeth will fade before I'm done with you, but you and I will both know they were there.
The skin on your shoulders is thicker, and under your clothes, so I may bury my teeth deeper, take the measure of your flesh, test it. I can drink the taste of you in, not just lick, but suck the essence of you into my throat.
If I lay you out beneath me, my hipbones pressing into the curve of your ass, breasts feeling the angles of your shoulder blades, I can make you come just with the play of my mouth.
I slide my hands down the length of your arms until our fingers intertwine and you are mine completely. I wet your skin with my tongue and blow, just to feel you shiver. When I kiss you there, in that triangle between shoulder, neck and spine, you are tense with anticipation. I shush against your skin.
More kissing and you start to squirm and beg, which makes me desperate, but I still wait, biting, tasting, but not marking. Not until you're nearly weeping with need, and then I suck us both over the edge.
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So, I did.
Title: Bite
Words: 300
Rating: Adult (f/f)
I use my lips to kiss your mouth, the soft warm skin inside your elbow, the crease at the back of your knee. Your cheekbone, eyebrows and nose, all feel the press of my lips.
For your neck, however, lips aren't enough. I kiss with my teeth, plucking at the skin until you moan and tilt your head and then, sealing the oval of my mouth against your heat, I let you feel my bite.
The skin there is thin, and there's a world outside these walls where you are busy and important, so I'm careful not to mark you there. The twin curves of my teeth will fade before I'm done with you, but you and I will both know they were there.
The skin on your shoulders is thicker, and under your clothes, so I may bury my teeth deeper, take the measure of your flesh, test it. I can drink the taste of you in, not just lick, but suck the essence of you into my throat.
If I lay you out beneath me, my hipbones pressing into the curve of your ass, breasts feeling the angles of your shoulder blades, I can make you come just with the play of my mouth.
I slide my hands down the length of your arms until our fingers intertwine and you are mine completely. I wet your skin with my tongue and blow, just to feel you shiver. When I kiss you there, in that triangle between shoulder, neck and spine, you are tense with anticipation. I shush against your skin.
More kissing and you start to squirm and beg, which makes me desperate, but I still wait, biting, tasting, but not marking. Not until you're nearly weeping with need, and then I suck us both over the edge.
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For some reason, it's this line I love best, perhaps because it grounds us in a reality outside the fic:
The skin there is thin, and there's a world outside these walls where you are busy and important, so I'm careful not to mark you there.
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That grounding in reality is what is important to me, so I am pleased to hear it comes across.
Thank you.
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Can't read her latest RPS chapter cuz of spoilers, but I'm very glad I can read this. This is gorgeous. I really have no other words.
Just gorgeous. :)
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That was very nice indeed.
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If I lay you out beneath me, my hipbones pressing into the curve of your ass, breasts feeling the angles of your shoulder blades, I can make you come just with the play of my mouth.
was especially nice! Conjures all sorts of lvoely images!
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I'm just going to bask in your greatness for a bit if that's ok. ;P
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*is blushing*
thank you!
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and ditto on the neck kissing thing ;)
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I may need a little lie down now.
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And I *love* this. Evidence of unselfish care beyond the immediate passionate craving ... revs up the heat oh, so much more ...
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Happy to provide the neck-lust *g*
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thanks hon.
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I kiss with my teeth
Buh.
suck the essence of you into my throat.
LKAJSDLKJASD YOU.sldknfasf...PRETTY. AND HOT.
I can make you come just with the play of my mouth.
iiiii...oh my god.
I shush against your skin.
MMM I love the use of the word shush. So unexpected and gentle but sensual.
Not until you're nearly weeping with need, and then I suck us both over the edge.
ghaosgnalkjasldkfj this is so gorgeous. you are crazy talented, my god. um *fans self* guh. *goes to next one*
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your comments are gorgeous. And so are you.
*tackle-glomps*
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Yup, that's all I've got.
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