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Title: There's a Sucker Born Every Minute
Pairing: Adam/Tommy (mentions of Tommy/Mike, Tommy/Anderson, Tommy/OMC)
Words: 530
Rating: NC17
The Obvious: I do not know any of the people whose public personas are used in this story and neither believe nor mean to imply this ever happened.
A/N: for day 25 of [livejournal.com profile] mmom. I did actually write it yesterday, but Fast Five didn't get out til 1 am! :D
Summary: Four times Tommy Joe considers giving head, and one time he does it




It's pretty much a universally known fact that getting head makes a guy feel better. That's why in movies so many guys try to buy strippers or hookers for their friends when they get dumped. Tommy has not got the cash for a hooker though. When Mike looks up at him with wet eyes from his nearly horizontal slump on the sofa, Tommy thinks, who needs a hooker, he could do it himself. Just get down on his knees right here, give him a hummer, cheer him up. But then he thinks about all the reasons that's a shitty idea, so he asks Mike if he needs another beer instead.

Tommy has always had a thing about going down under a girl's skirt, eating her out where she can't see him, like a secret. Anderson looks really good in a skirt, shaking his ass out there on the dance floor. Nursing a beer from his vantage point in a corner booth, Tommy wonders what it would be like, getting up under there, pulling Anderson's dick out one leg hole of his lacy panties, sucking and licking with the heavy drape of satin falling over his shoulders.

Whatever they were watching is finished, and something Tommy cares about even less is on, and Adam's dick is right there, nudging the back of Tommy's head, and it would be easy to turn over, reach up and unzip Adam's jeans, get his lips on Adam's cock, let it go the rest of the way to hard in his mouth. After, though, when Adam wanted to talk, that's when things would get complicated, so Tommy just snuggles in closer, closes his eyes.

After the after party, Tommy's on a lounger out by the pool with some guy who he's pretty sure is a friend of Terrance's. He hopes so, because it's only right to know someone's name when you've had your tongue in his mouth, but Tommy doesn't really want to stop the tongue thing he's got going on to ask him. Then he's distracted by the way the guy is kissing his neck, and his stomach, and then sucking on Tommy's dick. Before Tommy can get around to deciding if he should return the favor, someone leans over the bedroom balcony above them to shout, "Hey Mitchell, are you down there violating another gay virgin?" and the mood is broken.

Tommy's on his knees and elbows between Adam's spread thighs, both fists holding Adam's dick steady while he sucks hungrily on the head. There's no TV, no one is sad or drunk, and everyone's naked. It's nothing like going down on a girl except for all the ways it's just the same, Adam's hands in his hair and the noises he's making, the taste and smell of sex, the way it makes Tommy feel almost breathless with power and really really horny. It's nothing and everything like he imagined. He's glad he waited, and glad he's not waiting anymore.
There are 26 comments on this entry. (Reply.)
 
posted by [identity profile] thrace-adams.livejournal.com at 06:53pm on 26/05/2011
UNF that was hot....just SHIT that was just f**king hot!!!!
 
posted by [identity profile] thrace-adams.livejournal.com at 07:02pm on 26/05/2011
aRGHHH why didn't it take my comment. I LOVED THIS UNF it was FRAKKING HOT. Just DAMN. I'mma read again.
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 07:50pm on 08/06/2011
So glad you liked it! Thank you :D
 
posted by [identity profile] jillian75.livejournal.com at 08:34pm on 26/05/2011
... just ...
F***, that was hot...
Imma join Thrace and reread again
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 07:52pm on 08/06/2011
Thank you! So glad it hit the spot :D
 
posted by [identity profile] red-adam.livejournal.com at 08:37pm on 26/05/2011
Oh this is beautiful, as always, daahling!

P.S. 4th paragraph typo - got going should be not going.

WHy is it so nearly the end of May?
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 07:53pm on 08/06/2011
So glad you liked! Thank you :D

and nope, he's got the tongue thing going on. <3
 
posted by [identity profile] red-adam.livejournal.com at 08:45pm on 08/06/2011
Ahh - this is why I didn't do 'A' level English literature - I missed that subtlety completely! ILYSFM!
 
posted by [identity profile] wynkat1313.livejournal.com at 10:19pm on 26/05/2011
That was very cool, I like the different thoughts in Tommy's fuzzy little head - particularly his thought about Anderson mmmm and then the culmination. Very nice.
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 05:04pm on 28/06/2011
Thank you so much :D
 
posted by [identity profile] zebrui.livejournal.com at 11:33pm on 26/05/2011
You have such a way with words ♥

It's a short piece, but it's not missing a single line. Perfectly rounded.
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 05:04pm on 28/06/2011
Thank you! what a lovely compliment :D :D
 
posted by [identity profile] qafaddiction.livejournal.com at 11:53pm on 26/05/2011
I can't believe I'm going to say this about a BJ fic, but that was sweet! LOL It always comes down to the emotion, and you captured that well here. :)
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 05:05pm on 28/06/2011
lolol I seem incapable of writing not-sweet fic :D :D

Thank you!
 
posted by [identity profile] maggy-97.livejournal.com at 02:10am on 27/05/2011
Oh, I really liked that! The short snippets of Tommy's thoughts in the different situations! That was well done. And hot! :)
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 05:05pm on 28/06/2011
I'm so glad you liked it! Thank you! :D
 
posted by [identity profile] nekofreak.livejournal.com at 02:34am on 27/05/2011
SOOOOOOOOO HOT *___*
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 05:06pm on 28/06/2011
\o/

Thank you! :D
 
posted by [identity profile] yukisherry.livejournal.com at 01:38pm on 27/05/2011
UNF
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 05:06pm on 28/06/2011
:D :D
 
posted by [identity profile] casey270.livejournal.com at 11:46pm on 27/05/2011
i love angsty, introspective porn. this is fucking perfect!
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 05:06pm on 28/06/2011
Thank you! So glad you enjoyed it :D
 
posted by [identity profile] tv-fan-2008.livejournal.com at 02:04am on 28/05/2011
This is hot and I love the last line :)
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 05:06pm on 28/06/2011
Yay, thank you! :D
 
posted by [identity profile] ratbert71.livejournal.com at 08:07am on 29/05/2011
you get a high-five for this!
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 05:06pm on 28/06/2011
whoot!

Thank you :D

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