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Title: The one with the Brindmolian sex-venom
Author: [livejournal.com profile] rivers_bend
Pairing: Sulu/Chekov and Kirk/Bones/Chekov
Rating: NC-17
Words: ~4,000
Warnings/Enticements: "sex-pollen", double penetration, toys, bottom!Chekov
Summary: Your basic sex-pollen fuck-or-die scenario in which Kirk and Bones are good enough to lend a helping hand or two.
A/N: inspired by conversations with [livejournal.com profile] cathybites and [livejournal.com profile] loveflyfree and by this gorgeous piece of (NSFW) art by [livejournal.com profile] lizardspots





Hikaru Sulu is absolutely certain that he needs at least eighteen hours rest before it will be even remotely possible for him to have sex again. His dick is chafed raw, his fingers ache, his lips and tongue are numb. He can hardly move.

Pavel Chekov is suffering the opposite problem.

Twenty-one hours ago he had been helping to catalog a box of specimens an away team brought up from Brindmol 2, and he'd been bitten by a small shrew-like creature. Since then, he's been utterly insatiable. He's just fucked himself for the sixth or seventh time with Hikaru's left hand (Hikaru lost track hours ago of how many times each of his body parts have penetrated his boyfriend's body) and now he's rutting up against Hikaru's hip, kissing his neck, whispering needy sounds against Sulu's skin.

"Pavel," Hikaru says, patting Pavel's hip tiredly, "I think you need to go see Dr. McCoy."

"He already told me there's nothing he can do except sedate me, and I can't do that again. Even with the drugs the pain was terrible. The only thing that helps is having you inside me."

"I know." Sulu sighs. "I meant—" He's not sure he can say this, until Pavel reaches for his dick again, wanting—needing—him to get hard, and that is just not possible. "I meant you should go and see him as a friend. A friend who could help you."

Pavel lifts his head, shocked, staring at Hikaru. Still his hips move restlessly, rubbing, rubbing, endlessly rubbing. "You— You want me to ask the doctor to have sex with me?"

"No. I don't want you to." Hikaru doesn't want McCoy or anyone else so much as looking at Pavel, but they'd tried their collection of dildos and Pavel's own fingers, neither of which worked to sooth the terrible ache, and so he doesn't see any other choice. Pavel needs, and as much as it pains him, Hikaru can no longer give. Holding Pavel as tightly as he can, Hikaru says, "Just for a few hours. I'm sorry. I'm so sorry."

"It is I who am sorry," Pavel says, tears bright in his eyes. "I am sorry I was not more careful. Sorry I have hurt you."

"I'll be fine. We'll be fine. The effects won't last more than another day." Hikaru doesn't know what Dr. McCoy was basing this assertion on, but he clings to it now.

"I can try to just—"

"No." Hikaru cuts Pavel off. "I have seen the pain it causes you. I don't mind." A white lie under the circumstances is not so bad, surely. "And the captain would not allow McCoy to try to steal your affections from me even if the doctor wanted to."

"Perhaps the captain will not allow him to help me in this way at all."

Hikaru doubts that would be the case, but it gives him an idea. "Maybe they can both help you." In fact, Kirk might be the better one to ask.

Pavel looks at Hikaru carefully and says, "If you think it is best, I will do it. They are both good men." Pavel is no longer tearful, but is rocking faster against Hikaru's hip, and looking pained again.

"I think we must," Hikaru says, kissing Pavel's face.

****~~****


Jim Kirk has been off duty for two hours—long enough to eat, shower, and cajole Bones into putting down the "very important" new regulations from Starfleet to join Kirk in his quarters—when the communicator chimes to announce a person-to-person transmission.

"Kirk," he answers, keeping an arm tight around Bones, who is trying to escape to a more captain-and-CMO-appropriate distance as though the call were on screen.

"Captain? Sulu, here." His pilot's voice is ragged. Desperate sounding. "Can you please come to my quarters? I wouldn't ask, only—"

He doesn't need to finish. Bones has filled Jim in on the situation with Chekov and the Brindmolian creature's venom. "I'll be right there," Jim interrupts.

"Thank you, sir."

Before Jim can ask if he should bring Bones, the transmission is terminated.

"Fifteen hours since I released the boy from sick bay," Bones says, looking at the wall chronometer. "I'm amazed Sulu has lasted as long as he did. Why is he calling you and not me, though?"

"I don't know," Jim says, though he has his suspicions. "But I'll call you if I need you. Stay here."

Bones looks as happy about being given orders as he always does, but he settles back on the sofa.

When Jim gets to Sulu's quarters, the voice that bids him to enter is frantic. Once the door shuts behind him and his eyes adjust to the dimmer room lighting, he can see why. The pilot's bed is a shambles, the covers shoved to the floor and the bottom sheet tugged loose from all but one corner of the mattress, and Chekov is straddling Sulu's chest, holding tight to Sulu's right wrist, fucking himself on his lover's fingers, writhing wildly while Sulu lies limp and utterly exhausted beneath him.

"I can't—I just can't help him anymore," Sulu says, his head flopping to the side to face his captain.

At that moment Chekov twists sharply, his shoulders hunching, and he comes violently, crying out as a single thin jet of fluid shoots past Sulu's face to land in his hair. Jim is amazed the kid isn't reduced to coming dry by this point after what Bones said about Pavel's condition.

Jim is also trying very hard to remember that he is these men's commanding officer and they are asking for his help, not providing him with an incredibly hot, if somewhat disturbing, sex show.

"You must help him, Keptin," Chekov says. "I am hurting him, now. But when I stop, when I am not being filled and—" he waves a hand helplessly as though saying these words in front of Jim is distressing him. "When I stop it is just so painful. I feel as though I will die."

Though Jim is still finding it hard to believe the men are asking what he thinks they're asking, he decides not to be coy. Not to enquire if they meant to call the doctor. "You're asking me to take over your duties for a while, Mr. Sulu?" He manages to keep his voice steady, like he's asking if Sulu needs relief at the helm for a bathroom break. Apparently it was the right tone to take, because both men slump with relief.

"Thank you," Chekov says fervently. Sulu just nods once, weakly.

Jim hasn't actually said he'd do it, but he supposes his reputation, not to mention the tent in the front of his trousers, spoke for him. "We should leave the lieutenant to rest," Jim says. "Unless you would rather—" He can't actually bring himself to ask if Sulu wants to watch. He's seen the way the men look at each other, as though the rest of the world doesn't exist—Jim can't imagine they have the same kind of understanding that he has with Bones.

"I'll stay here and rest," Sulu grinds out. "You can— You can take him." He's looking at Chekov as he says it, something in his eyes Jim isn't meant to read.

"He'll need clothes, something to put on so we can get back to my quarters," Jim says gently.

Chekov bends down and kisses Sulu passionately. Something else Jim wasn't meant to see. He turns away to give them some privacy and spots a pile of clothes on a chair in the corner that he recognizes as the loose tunic and pants Sulu wears in the gym. Giving the men another moment, he goes and scoops them up. Before he can decide whether or not it's okay to turn back towards the bed, Chekov is next to him. Lithe, naked, bruised, reeking of sex, plucking the clothes from Jim's fingers.

As Chekov pulls them on, Sulu beckons Jim over to the bed. Jim tries not to look at his crewman's abraded skin, the raw red of his penis, but it's hard not to see. "Would you like me to send Dr. McCoy in?" he asks quietly.

"No." Sulu shakes his head. "I think you will need him. With two of you, he might—"

Jim gets a vivid picture of Chekov down on all fours, Bones buried deep in his ass, his mouth stretched wide around Jim's cock, and he manages, just, to suppress the shudder of want that gives him. "Okay," he says, and nods curtly, as though he's just going to take Chekov down to sick bay for an immunization panel.

"Now," Chekov says from over near the door. "Please. We must hurry."

Jim has had his share and then some of men and women both begging him to fuck them. But still, none of that has prepared him for this. With a last nod at his distressed pilot, Jim pushes past Chekov and palms open the door.

They hurry through the corridors, which are thankfully sparsely populated at this hour, Chekov whimpering quietly, and Jim trying to walk in a way that doesn't call attention to his still-stiff cock. Chekov has always fallen firmly in the look-but-don't-touch category through dint of being a junior officer and out of respect for the relationship he has with Sulu. But he is definitely worth looking at, and as sorry as Jim is for the distress the situation is causing his men—his friends—a part of him (yes, that part) is selfishly glad for this opportunity. That might make him a bad captain, but for god's sake, he's only human.

He's not sure how exactly he is going to be able to explain his justifications to Bones, however.

As soon as they step over the threshold, before the door even slides shut behind them, Chekov launches himself at Jim, arms and legs wrapped around him, sending him staggering sideways into the wall.

"Jim?" Bones says incredulously from the bed, where he's retired with his PADD. "What the hell are you doing?"

Chekov answers for him, between bites and licks to Jim's neck, his hips never slowing in their constant search for friction against Jim's thigh. "I am causing Mr. Sulu to become damaged. The Keptin has offered that you and he will help us."

"Oh, he has, has he?"

Bones has a whole arsenal of disapproving looks, and up to now, Jim would have stated confidently that he'd seen them all. But he's pretty sure this one is new.

"He is a very good Keptin. And you are a very good doctor." This Chekov solemnly declares while simultaneously pulling off his clothes and tugging Jim toward the bed by one elbow.

"I don't know what your definition of 'good' is, kid, but—"

"Please, Doctor. Please!" Chekov is naked now, and plucking at Bones' shirt. "It hurts so much. I am sorry."

Bones meets Jim's eyes over the top of Chekov's head and they have one of their silent conversations.

How could I say no to this? Jim asks.

You could have tried. You're the captain, for god's sake. This is totally inappropriate.

But Bones, look at him. And you should have seen poor Sulu. Besides.
Look at him. We're never going to get another opportunity to tap that ass.

You are incorrigible, and I have no idea why I put up with you.

Because you love me.

Whatever. Take your clothes off, we might as well get on with this, then. But this is
not going in my report to Starfleet about the effects of Brindmolian Atarax toxin.

Jim never has to be told twice to get naked when sex is on the cards.

Bones, who hasn't had as much time to get used to the idea that they're doing this as Jim, and who is generally slower to disrobe in any case, is still wearing his pants and undershirt when Chekov, seeing Jim naked and hard, bends over the edge of the bed, arms and head in Bones' lap, and begs, "Fuck me, Keptin. Hard. Please. Now."

Jim would have to be made of ice to say no to that.

It probably shouldn't be a turn on that Chekov's ass is smeared with lube and come, mottled with another man's fingerprints, but Jim gave up years ago worrying about what gets him hard, and god it all just makes the kid more wanton, more needy, makes Jim dizzy with how dirty and wrong this is. It's almost too much.

Bones curses, making Jim look up to see that Chekov is mouthing him through his pants.

"Oh, fuck," Jim says and pushes into Chekov's willing body.

His ass is hot, soft, and wet, his hole red and sore-looking stretched around Jim's cock. Sulu and Chekov must have bought lubrication from one of the shops on their last shore leave, because the medical-grade lube Bones dispenses from sick bay would be sticky by now, but Jim slides in without pause.

Chekov sobs and jerks backwards, taking Jim deeper. "Yes. Oh, da, thank you, Keptin."

Bones looks stunned, frozen, one hand on the bed propping him up, the other hovering over Chekov's curls like he's not sure whether to soothe the boy, guide his mouth more firmly over his dick, or pull him off his lap completely. Jim can't help him, is too busy holding on to Chekov's hips, pulling him back to meet his thrusts. Chekov is wild with need and the feeling seems to be catching.

Between Chekov's soft heat, his pleading for harder and more, and the look of lust warring with shocked disapproval on Bones' face, Jim comes embarrassingly quickly. He tries to keep going, but too soon his dick slips out of Chekov's ass.

"More, more," Chekov begs, abandoning Bones' lap so he can crawl onto the bed, ass in the air. "Your fingers, please."

"Clothes off, you're next," Jim says to Bones, stepping forward to sink three fingers into that slippery heat.

While Bones pulls his clothes off, Jim concentrates on Chekov, getting his fourth finger in, twisting, pushing, until Chekov is stretched wide around his knuckles, then curving his fingers down against the kid's prostate, rubbing with his thumb from the outside, making Chekov jerk and shake, scream into the blankets bunched in his fists.

"Jesus," Jim hears from over his shoulder.

"Never let it be said I haven't learned anything from sleeping with a doctor," Jim replies, lifting his chin so Bones can kiss him.

With Chekov falling apart under his hands and Bones tilting his head back, plundering his mouth, blood is starting to pool again in Jim's groin. Chekov shouts and jerks forward, pulling himself off Jim's hand, falling on his side, flushed and panting.

"Water," he gasps, and Bones, ever the doctor, abandons Jim's mouth to get him some.

Jim appreciates the man's tight ass, pale against his darker back and thighs which are lightly tanned from the day Jim insisted they swim on their last trip planet-side. He appreciates even more Bones' cock, heavy between his legs, on the return trip. It's not fully erect yet, but Chekov clearly needs a moment to recover and drink his water, which will give Jim time to suck Bones hard before Chekov is begging to be fucked again. Jim's mouth waters at the thought.

The bed is low enough that Jim can pull Bones between his spread thighs and get his mouth on him without too much bending. Bones groans and grips Jim's hair, but keeps a watchful eye on their charge, even as Jim is cupping his balls and licking the length of his cock.

"Always the doctor," Jim murmurs, but then gets back to his task, teasing, sucking, licking his best friend to full hardness.

Chekov drinks quickly and moves on to complimenting Jim's blow job skills. Flattering as he is, commending Jim's ability to deep throat and his technique "stimulating the doctor's glans," the heavily accented and overly technical commentary is rather distracting. After a minute or two, Jim stops and says, "For god's sake, Bones, fuck him and shut him up already."

"Yes, please." Chekov says, seemingly not offended in the slightest. "This time I would like to be on top, if you don't mind."

"Whatever makes you happy, kid." Bones pushes Jim off the bed, climbing on in his place, settling on his back, legs spread to accommodate Chekov who is still huddled at the bed's foot.

"You are very good to help me," Chekov says, moving with surprising grace, considering what his body has been through in the last twenty-four hours, to straddle Bones' hips and impale himself on Bones' definitely hard dick.

Jim doesn't know where to look. At where Bones is sinking into that gorgeous ass, at Chekov's face, blissed out with the feeling of Bones filling him, at Bones' face, wide-eyed with wonder that this is really happening to him and slack-jawed with sensation. He steps back to get a better view, hand moving to his own mostly hard dick. "If you could see what you look like," he can't help saying, which gets a grunt from Bones and makes Chekov bounce even faster against Bones' thrusts.

The view, the soundtrack, the feel of his hand on his cock is all too much, and Jim starts moaning. Chekov turns to look at him.

"I can take more," he says, words sounding punched out of his lungs with each thrust of Bones' cock. "Both of you at once."

Bones' mouth drops open at the words, and even Jim is struck dumb for a minute before he rips open the drawer of the bedside table and slicks his cock with the lube there.

"He's just a kid, Jim," Bones hisses, grabbing Jim's wrist.

Chekov hears him and is quick to reassure. "Earlier, before we determined that the silicone phallus does not help, I took both my dildos at once. I will be fine, I promise."

"Jesus." At this rate they won't have to find out if Chekov is telling the truth or not because just the picture of the boy spread out, stretched impossibly wide, crying and begging because the toys are not enough, is going to make Jim come before he can do anything.

"You two are trying to kill me," Bones grouses, but he lets go of Jim.

When Jim climbs onto the foot of the bed, Chekov stills his hips and bends forward, resting his head against Bones' chest, his cock-filled ass tilted up like an offering. Jim slaps Bones' calf to get him to move his legs together and then moves up until he's straddling Bones' thighs. When Chekov whines needily, Jim rubs a finger along his rim, stroking where it meets Bones' cock, edging inside.

It's tight, but not impossible. Ignoring the impatient noises the other men are making, Jim concentrates, turning his finger so his knuckle is against Bones' dick, stroking the ridge of muscle pressed against his fingertip. Chekov twists wantonly, keening into Bones' shoulder. Bones rocks his hips in response, allowing Jim to slip a second finger in alongside the first. The thought of getting his dick in there, more than twice again the size of his two fingers, makes him dizzy. Rubbing against Bones' cock in the tight hot sheath of Chekov's body. God.

"Now, now, now," Chekov begs, bringing Jim back to the room. Lining up, he pulls his fingers out and pushes in with his dick.

All three of them groan, Chekov's thankful and broken, Bones' deep, turning to a gasp as Jim starts to move, Jim's feeling torn from his chest. It's everything and nothing like he imagined, tighter, hotter, impossibly sexy to look at, but slick enough that he can move, slide almost out then in again, snap his hips, one hand on Chekov's waist, the other on Bones' thigh for balance.

Jim is doing all the work, but he doesn't mind, relishing the sounds the others are making, the way they grab and clutch at each other's arms, rock in time with Jim's thrusts. He thinks he might be able to do this forever.

Bones comes first, jerking hard, his muscles going rigid under Jim's hand, his come making everything slicker, wetter. Jim thrusts harder, shorter, sharper jabs, feeling himself getting closer to the edge.

"Too much, too much," Bones is saying, dick oversensitive now he's come. But Jim can't stop, can't wait long enough for Bones to pull out, keeps fucking, jerking Chekov's hips back so his ass slaps over and over against Jim's thighs until the boy's shouts of "da, da, da," send Jim over too. Somehow he manages to collapse sideways so that Bones only has to try and breathe under the weight of one fucked-out man, not two.

This time they are all in need of water, but, under the influence of the venom, Chekov recovers first, stumbling across the room, murmuring instructions at the replicator. He even thinks to ask for straws.

Bones and Jim have only managed half their glasses by the time Chekov is writhing again between them.

"How the hell did Sulu last as long as he did?" Bones mutters to Jim as Chekov pulls their hands in between his spread thighs.

"I'd do the same for you," Jim answers against Bones' ear as their fingers tangle and sink into Chekov's needy body.

****~~****


According to the chronometer above his bed, Hikaru has only been sleeping—fitfully and with bad dreams—for a little over three hours when the communicator chimes wake him.

"It's Dr. McCoy," comes the voice through the speaker once Hikaru musters enough noise for the computer to acknowledge it as a response. "Pavel is fine now. He's sleeping."

Hikaru wants to weep with relief, but does not wish to embarrass himself in front of the CMO. He cannot speak, not even to express his gratitude, only manages a shuddering sigh.

McCoy obviously hears him though, and continues. "I've brought him to sick bay for observation, cleaned him up, and given him some pain killers. I expect he'll sleep at least another twelve hours.

"You sleep yourself out and then come down and see me. I want to check you over, too. Then you can sit with him until he wakes, if you'd like. The captain has agreed that you are both to be on sick leave until I clear you for duty."

Even though he's being kinder than usual, McCoy sounds just as professional as always and not at all like he just spent the last three hours sexually servicing Hikaru's boyfriend. Hikaru is extremely grateful.

"Thank you," he finally manages. "Seriously. I—well. Thank you."

"It's—alright, Lieutenant. Get some sleep. I'll see you later."

Still beyond exhausted, but no longer worried sick about Pavel, Hikaru drops back to sleep. A last, ridiculous thought flits through his mind before unconsciousness claims him. Was McCoy's slight hesitation because he thought it would be tactless to say, "It's my pleasure?"

_______________________________________________________________________
now with The Morning After.
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posted by [identity profile] arcane_lark.livejournal.com at 07:07pm on 28/07/2009
Wow! Hot as hell, hitting so many kinks just right, and still with this undertone of something so heartbreaking.
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 10:33pm on 28/07/2009
Thank you so so much! I'm glad that the undertones came through the kink.
ext_16103: (sulu chekov eyes)
posted by [identity profile] tallycola.livejournal.com at 07:10pm on 28/07/2009
Oh guuuuuuuuuh. Poor Pavel and Hikaru! :( :(
Kirk and McCoy are, uh, really *good* men for helping them out like that ;)
That said, I'll be in my bunk.
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 10:34pm on 28/07/2009
Thank you! I'm happy Hikaru and Pavel's relationship came through the hot :D
 
posted by [identity profile] philalethia.livejournal.com at 07:22pm on 28/07/2009
Okay, so this is the first Star Trek fic I've ever read, and I only did so because, well, I can never turn down a fic with double penetration. *blush* BUT HOLY HELL. This is IMPOSSIBLY HOT. I can't remember the last time a fic affected me this strongly, which makes me want to investigate if there are other such lovely gems to be found in this fandom. Mmm, well-written and delicious! ♥
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 10:38pm on 28/07/2009
I'm totally the same way about DP :D

What an amazing compliment; thank you! And yes. omg, there is some AMAZING fic in this fandom. You should have a look at [livejournal.com profile] crackenterprise for a place to start with good fic.

I am so so glad you enjoyed this so much!
sylvanwitch: (Default)
posted by [personal profile] sylvanwitch at 07:32pm on 28/07/2009
I've resisted and resisted getting into this fandom, not because I don't adore ST in all its permutations and THIS 'verse in particular but because this fandom stole MY fandom, damnit. *grins*

However, I couldn't POSSIBLY resist a sex pollen fic because I have an inordinately weak spot for those sorts (curses, sex pollen, enemy ritualism, etc...).

And I am oh so very glad I gave in because THIS is just delicious. I love the characterizations, can practically hear Chekov's adorable accent, can see Sulu's face...

Brilliant and so fucking hot.

*claps and whistles wildly*
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 10:40pm on 28/07/2009
This fandom is just borrowing your fandom. Most of us are still doing both :D

I'm so glad you gave in, too! Thank you :D And I am so glad the voices sounded right. *hugs*
 
posted by [identity profile] blcwriter.livejournal.com at 07:40pm on 28/07/2009
Double penetration's not my kink, but this one was excellent.
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 10:41pm on 28/07/2009
I'm glad this worked for you even if it's not your kink. Thank you! :)
 
posted by [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com at 08:08pm on 28/07/2009
...

That was awesomely balanced between crack and consequences. Also, really fucking hot. Wow.
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 10:43pm on 28/07/2009
thank you so so much. I really wanted to make it not just all about the kink and the crack, so I am thrilled you saw a balance. :D
 
posted by [identity profile] xkiisstheraiin.livejournal.com at 08:59pm on 28/07/2009
HOTTTTTT. hahaha this was crazy, cracky & awesome. loved it :D xD
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 10:44pm on 28/07/2009
Thank you! I'm so glad you loved it :D
 
posted by [identity profile] rendolent.livejournal.com at 09:42pm on 28/07/2009
Chekov is so cute, asking for straws. That was hooott.
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 10:44pm on 28/07/2009
Chekov is pretty much endlessly adorable as far as I can see :D :D

Thank you!
 
posted by [identity profile] saavikam77.livejournal.com at 09:49pm on 28/07/2009
*falls out of chair* DAYUM!

I totally love your treatment of the trope here. Where it's NOT all awesome pleasure. Poor Chekov. Poor Sulu! Of course, I hope for all their sakes that things aren't suddenly weird and awkward for them all, but I suspect it probably will be. Again, poor Sulu.

*applauds wildly*
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 10:49pm on 28/07/2009
*picks you up and dusts you off*

thank you so much! I am already worrying over how Chekov will feel when he wakes up in sick bay, hoping he out-sleeps Sulu so that Sulu is there when he wakes up... I really wanted to write this kink (have wanted to for ages, but am, at the same time, reluctant to break my s/d otp by even so much as adding a third person), but all this plot got in the way. I'm so glad to hear that it didn't ruin the trope :D
 
posted by [identity profile] secretsolitaire.livejournal.com at 12:07am on 29/07/2009
*passes out* That is...nnngh. Yes.
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 12:22am on 29/07/2009
*revives*

Thank you! :D :D
 
posted by [identity profile] hollycomb.livejournal.com at 01:21am on 29/07/2009
I love that this was not only hot but kind of heartbreaking! How Sulu is willing to let Chekov have what he needs, and Kirk is guilty and Bones is like FLUMMOXED, omg. ;___; I'm kind of into the idea of Chekov the ship slut and Sulu who loves and saves him, and while this wasn't exactly that it wasssss definitely something I wanted to read very much. :D :D And of course any combination of Sulu/Chekov and Kirk/Chekov is amazing. ;)))
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 02:36am on 29/07/2009
I thought for a brief moment that I would just be writing a kinky pwp. But then I remembered this was Sulu and Chekov, and they are in LOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE, and so I wanted to kind of deal with that, too. I'm so glad I managed the hot and heartbreaking both.

Poor flummoxed Bones. I have this idea somehow that he's always kind of mystified by the notion that people might actually want him.

and hmmm. I really kind of love the idea of ship slut Chekov saved by Sulu.

thank you, honey!
 
posted by [identity profile] loveflyfree.livejournal.com at 01:21am on 29/07/2009
oh sweetie! that was just. um. yes.

what I love about this (besides the SCORCHINGLY HOT porn) is that you manage to keep all of them in character and it doesn't just spiral into random porn. they are all still very much them to the point where you could write fluffy schmoopy sequels to this and it wouldn't feel out of place.

yeah I think my jailbait!Chekov icon is appropriate here. ♥
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 03:12am on 29/07/2009
I can't tell you how happy I am that you feel like they're all in character. I always get so nervous writing new fandoms! Thank you! And I am tempted by sequels to this. Though I have many other things to write!

jailbait!Chekov is ALWAYS appropriate.
 
posted by [identity profile] affectingly.livejournal.com at 01:38am on 29/07/2009
Yup, still unbelievably hot. I am so glad you wrote this! \o/
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 03:13am on 29/07/2009
Thank you so much! And thank you :D
 
posted by [identity profile] stormatdusk.livejournal.com at 06:04am on 29/07/2009
o.O

in a good way.
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 10:27pm on 29/07/2009
I'm glad it was good! Thank you :D
 
posted by [identity profile] elenauial.livejournal.com at 09:35am on 29/07/2009
So. So. SO HOT.
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 10:30pm on 29/07/2009
thank you! :D
 
posted by [identity profile] julie-3000.livejournal.com at 01:00pm on 29/07/2009
I so love it. the perfect kink ^^ McCoy/Kirk/Chekov is my face OT3 <3
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 10:35pm on 29/07/2009
thank you so much! They do make a sexy OT3 :D
 
posted by [identity profile] kilala10.livejournal.com at 06:02pm on 29/07/2009
I shouldn't be reading hot fics in tripple digit weather.
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 10:38pm on 29/07/2009
*sends you a fan*

OT, that icon makes me LOL so much :D

thank you!
 
posted by [identity profile] cassandra-leeds.livejournal.com at 09:55pm on 29/07/2009
For some reason these "sex pollen" type stories make me moderately uncomfortable because something about them rings as the character being sick(which is kind squicky for me) rather than being intoxicated, which I prefer. But I read them anyway, because when they turn out like this, it's worth it. Hot sex, oh my goodness! My OT3 too! Loved how you portrayed Bones' shocked yet aroused reaction to *gah!* Chekov mouthing at his groin and Jim's rather professional side with Sulu and later sweet and tender with Bones. Also Chekov shouting "Da" over and over at the climax was so perfect and sweet and hot I very nearly clapped at my screen. XD

Really nice work!
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 10:48pm on 29/07/2009
I'm glad this turned out good, thank you! These men definitely make for a hot OT3.

and omg, your icon! awesome.
 
posted by [identity profile] cathybites.livejournal.com at 01:15am on 30/07/2009
um. yeah. I have nothing. This has completely melted my brain. GUH.
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 03:04am on 30/07/2009
I'm so glad you liked it! (and I hope it's okay I name-dropped you. I forgot to ask first)

thank you for reading!!!!!
 
posted by [identity profile] findthesunrise.livejournal.com at 03:12am on 30/07/2009
Wow.

Just... yeah.
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 03:15am on 30/07/2009
Thank you! I am glad you liked :D
 
posted by [identity profile] tiffosis.livejournal.com at 03:13am on 30/07/2009
this was fantastic babe, i loved it. and it happens to hit upon one of bullet-proof kinks, so THANK YOU for that! =)
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 03:20am on 30/07/2009
You are most welcome! I've been wanting to write something like this for ages and ages, so was glad to get the opportunity. Thank YOU, honey!
 
posted by [identity profile] albion-lass.livejournal.com at 12:21pm on 30/07/2009
2 minutes after reading the fic i'm still giggling like a maniac over the last line. this was so awesome!!
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 03:47pm on 30/07/2009
I'm so glad the last line worked; this one was hard to end! Thank you :D
 
posted by [identity profile] shadowclub.livejournal.com at 05:31pm on 30/07/2009
Poor Sulu had quite the dilemma! This was insanely hot, but you still gave all the characters emotions-and characterization (which made it so much better)!
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 08:54pm on 30/07/2009
Thank you so much! I'm so glad both the hot and the character came through :D
 
posted by [identity profile] lafemmechatte.livejournal.com at 12:52am on 31/07/2009
ffuuucckkkkk alkdsjfa;lkdjsfa;lkdjfals;kdjfasldfj 'apowerhkjhsadlfkjasdfj

my brain is a melted incoherent puddle of goo. alkdjfajkdfja i'll be in my bunk.
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 04:29am on 31/07/2009
:D :D

Thank you! I'm happy you liked it!
 
posted by [identity profile] duskshadows.livejournal.com at 04:20am on 31/07/2009
...murfl?
well, shit. that was excellent. now i think i'm going to go take a cold shower...
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 04:30am on 31/07/2009
thank you so much! :D :D
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