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posted by [personal profile] rivers_bend at 10:38pm on 02/05/2006 under , , ,
A drabble companion to "Coming Home". I somehow couldn't fit it into the story, and wanted to try a 200 word drabble, so thought I would combine the two goals. Hope you like it. :D



Pilot had a glass of his mom’s whiskey and a joint and was in bed for the night when he heard stones rattling against the window. He opened it to see Jack standing there in shorts and a t-shirt. They were 13, it was summer and the world was full of possibilities beyond the trailer park.

Jack reached up to Pilot and helped him climb out of the window. Grabbing Pi’s hand he ran with him out into the desert without a word. They found a rock still sun hot and lay side by side looking up at the moon.

Fingers found fingers, wrists, arms, and hips. Hands moved to find hard-ons as though of their own volition. Both boys stared at the moon, pretending he wasn’t thrusting to meet his friend’s hand, stroking his friend’s cock. Jack was the first to move underneath Pilot’s waistband, actually touching flesh. Pilot came in the act of returning the favour.

Jack came not long after and they continued to lie side by side until the moon went behind a cloud. Jack got up and began to run back home. Pilot followed. Jack was laughing and called, “You can run faster than that!”
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posted by [identity profile] victorian-tweed.livejournal.com at 11:27pm on 02/05/2006
Sweet and beautiful, and it rings oh so true.

That you can express such honest and believable humanity in a mere 200 words is yet another example of your talent, River. You will never cease to astonish me.
 
posted by [identity profile] cucumberstar.livejournal.com at 01:43am on 05/05/2006
I wondered at this in the other fic... I caught the line of 'had something happened that night?' I'm so glad you posted it. It's simple but sort of beautiful with the idea of engless possibilites and stars.
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 02:21am on 05/05/2006
I wanted to fit this idea into the other story, but couldnt' do it, hence the companion piece. :D
 
posted by [identity profile] talia-sparkle.livejournal.com at 01:17pm on 05/05/2006
That was beautiful! Touching and sensual all at the same time.

Tweed's right, your talent is astounding!

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