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posted by [personal profile] rivers_bend at 02:42pm on 19/02/2008 under , , , , , ,
[livejournal.com profile] mickeym keeps sending the Dark Angel bunnies to nibble at my ankles. I have class soon, and I'm trying to write the final chapter to my powerverse fic, but comment porn came instead.

Alec/Max/Logan, 265 words, Adult rated


Alec's gaze was focused on the leather-clad fingers twined next to Max's face. Max grabbing at Logan's hand, clinging, staring past Alec and up into his eyes. Logan's sweat dripped down Alec's ass, the bead rolling just faster than the bead of Alec's sweat that ran down Max's breast. Max's thighs were hot, burning against his hips as he pushed into her, making Logan's hips feel almost cool in comparison against his ass.

Alec wanted this, Max's slick heat, the burn of Logan's thrusts, but it was eating him up trying to have it all at once. He wanted Logan spread out underneath him, wanted to pound into his ass, devour his mouth, instead of leaning down to kiss Max with Logan's voice in his ear telling him to do it. Begging him to do it.

He wanted Max up against a wall in a dark corner, legs wrapped around his waist, fingers hard on the back of his head while she arched and moaned and fucked him so hard she bruised her ass on his hipbones.

He didn't think about how he wanted Logan to seek him out at the end of a long day fighting, to touch his knee, look at him and say, "Talk to me." Or how he wanted Max to come and find him when she was worried about Joshua.

Instead, he watched those gloved fingers twisting and gripping for one last moment before he closed his eyes and leaned down to kiss Max as requested, baring the tattoo at the back of his neck to Logan's teeth.
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posted by [identity profile] littledrop.livejournal.com at 10:47pm on 19/02/2008
I haven't read it yet, and I already think it's awesome!
 
posted by [identity profile] littledrop.livejournal.com at 10:51pm on 19/02/2008
And it is awesome! Hot, sure, that's such a pretty visual, but there's so much more than that. Oh, Alec, you poor boy with all your wanting. I love it. LOVE IT.

Have you read [livejournal.com profile] veronamay's Alec/Logan stories? They are AMAZING.
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 10:53pm on 19/02/2008
Yay! I'm glad it worked after reading as well as before *g*

And no, I haven't. But I'm not sure I can imagine any way they wouldn't be awesome. Hot as fire pairing and awesome writer? Not that I have time for them. but I shall find and bookmark them for when I do. *nods*

thank you *g*
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 11:02pm on 19/02/2008
thank you!
 
posted by [identity profile] lima-sierra.livejournal.com at 10:53pm on 19/02/2008
Er, hot. Damn! And I have no idea who these guys are. Well, apart from Alex. Mmm, baby Jensen.
 
posted by [identity profile] lima-sierra.livejournal.com at 10:53pm on 19/02/2008
I mean Alec..... it's been a loooong day :)
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 10:54pm on 19/02/2008
I figured ;)
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 10:54pm on 19/02/2008
well, Max is Jessica Alba. And Logan is the other guy in my icon. And WHY HAVE YOU NOT SEEN DARK ANGEL YET, WOMAN???
 
posted by [identity profile] honeymull.livejournal.com at 10:56pm on 19/02/2008
Babe. Whoah.
Hot.
Daaaaamn. That last sentence is just killer.
This is such a fantastic example of being able to condense a whole storyline into just a short drabble - awesome job. Damn.
I'll just. Uh. Bunk and all...Yeah. Phew.
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 11:03pm on 19/02/2008
thank you!

I do love a drabble sometimes. just that thing of a snapshot of something.

Glad it worked for you! *g*
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posted by [personal profile] sylvanwitch at 11:05pm on 19/02/2008
Very, very, VERY hot! I'm not familiar with the show all that much, having seen only the Pilot and stray bits of episode, but this certainly makes me want to watch it! *grins*
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 11:15pm on 19/02/2008
You should DEFINITELY watch. Especially S2 with Jensen being... god, just perfect.

and thank you! If I succeed in making you watch, I will be thrilled!
 
posted by [identity profile] realpestilence.livejournal.com at 12:28am on 20/02/2008
The melancholy is subtle-Alec has them, but not necessarily for his own sake, and not in the way he wants them. Is something better than nothing?

I liked this very much.
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 06:17am on 20/02/2008
Thank you! and that has been the question of the ages for me, is something better than nothing. Which might be why this threesome appeals to me so much *g*
 
posted by [identity profile] realpestilence.livejournal.com at 06:09pm on 21/02/2008
It appeals to me, too. I think I've only seen one fic where the attraction was genuinely mutual among all 3 & that was only a littlw pwp kissing fic (very good, but...not long enough!!!)

It occurs to me that while Alec might feel like a third wheel, only included as a way for Max & Logan to be together despite the virus, it doesn't necessarily mean that *they* feel that way. No reason why they couldn't grow to care for him, however the relationship started out.

I doubt he'd understand that, though, unless they told him. It's easy to forget how *young* he is, and that he doesn't have the worldy experience the others do, despite his swift adaptation to being free of Manticore.

*thinks thinky thoughts*


 
posted by [identity profile] tabularassa.livejournal.com at 01:18am on 20/02/2008
Oh my...I like:) A lot...
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 06:18am on 20/02/2008
Why thank you, honey! *licks icon*
 
posted by [identity profile] tabularassa.livejournal.com at 06:54am on 20/02/2008
I wanna lick HER icon too...
 
posted by [identity profile] mickeym.livejournal.com at 03:04am on 20/02/2008
Oh, sure, blame ME. I'm sure, actually, that this is all your fault, somehow. I dunno how, but I'm SURE OF IT. *scowls*

Also? Still incredibly hot. Yes. *smooch*
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 06:18am on 20/02/2008
my fault... my fault...

hmmm...

you're probably right somehow *g*

and thank you sweetie!
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posted by [personal profile] zillah975 at 03:32am on 20/02/2008
Ooooohbhjnrmfnr...nngph.

Hot, and wanty, and twisty-chest, and soooo good.

AND! I just got the Jensen season of DA on DVD. Now I just have to watch it....
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 06:19am on 20/02/2008
I've been wanting to get my DVDs out for a week now, but have resisted in view of doing homework instead. It's so tempting though!

I'm so glad you liked this. It was fun *g*
 
posted by [identity profile] fpvs.livejournal.com at 06:07am on 20/02/2008
Mmmm.... Yum.
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 06:20am on 20/02/2008
*g*

Glad you liked!
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posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 03:06am on 25/02/2008
ICON!! gorgeousness :)

thanks!
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posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 03:20am on 25/02/2008
it never occurred to me to write in this fandom til now, and I might just have to write more Alec/Logan, for they are love. :)
 
posted by [identity profile] beckaandzac.livejournal.com at 01:02am on 09/04/2008
Hi! You left a comment on a J2 fic of mine and [livejournal.com profile] ciaan's, and since it was about one of my favorite details in that story, I figured I'd see who you were.

AND OMG I AM SO EXCITED BY THE EXISTENCE OF THIS FICLET IT REQUIRES CAPSLOCK!

Er, sorry for the flailing. But Max/Alec/Logan is like the best threesome ever, and full of hot and angst, and I don't understand why nobody writes it because, as this piece shows, it is made of awesome. Alec as the intermediary between them here is just YES.
Edited Date: 2008-04-09 01:02 am (UTC)
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 04:01am on 09/04/2008
More people should definitely write this threesome. And THANK YOU!

And yay for that story. I just... The whole thing with the condoms just seemed so perfect somehow. Like back then when he'd gotten the out of date one he'd been hoping and then he was on hold for so long and then here he was hoping with Jared again, and yet, he was so surprised when Jared said he wanted it. This whole complicated thing summed up by an out of date condom and a new box. ♥
 
posted by [identity profile] beckaandzac.livejournal.com at 12:41am on 10/04/2008
I have a major kink for attentive condom use, and paying attention to things like expiration dates (I did a couple of comics for World AIDS Day about proper condom use), and it was also exactly like you say, part of the set-up with Jensen having this whole life that just ended when he got *hands* whatever mysterious medical condition he had. It's so cool when things like that come across. <333

I'm gonna have to explore more of your fic. :)
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posted by [personal profile] ciaan at 05:04am on 10/04/2008
Yes, I have to say that you are one of the coolest people on the internets, because this is only the second Max/Alec/Logan fic I've seen, and there should absolutely be more OMGOMG! I started one but it's kinda taken back burner to some other things now. I'm so glad Becka was curious and found this! Because it is awesome.
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 05:24am on 10/04/2008
yay for curiosity. I am a big fan :D

Ah the back-burnered fics. I do so know about those. Though I try to finish what I start, between school and the next plot bunny, it doesn't always happen.

Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to comment!
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posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 02:49am on 09/01/2009
Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it :D
 
posted by [identity profile] twasadark.livejournal.com at 01:44am on 09/01/2009
Naughty and poignant and YUM.

&hearts
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 02:50am on 09/01/2009
Thank you! I'm so glad it was all three :D :D
 
posted by [identity profile] shiruy.livejournal.com at 12:22am on 27/01/2011
It's hot, of course, but much more than the porn Alec's characterization gets to me. It was the first thing I noticed actually when I started watching Supernatural - that Alec and Dean are remarkably similar to each other, always pretending to be selfish and hiding their insecurities behind lots of bravado and flirting. And man, I kind of started really disliking Logan for a while during the show because his high horse is really, really fucking high, but I can appreciate his hotness and his better sides as well. Kinda makes me wish the dynamic between Alec and Logan hadn't been so fucked up right from the start. Aaaand now I've talked a lot about anything but your drabble. XD

Okay, so, very hot drabble, love the imagery and the emotional needs of the different characters that come through loud and clear! Also, around now you're pobably starting to realize that I really *am* going to raid your complete sticky post. Hope you aren't sick of me yet. XD
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 04:51pm on 28/01/2011
I watched SPN first, but immediately suspected the casting agents for SPN had watched some DA. Alec and Dean are great compliments to each other.

heeee. I have a long sticky post! I never get sick of lovely comments though. It's a huge compliment!

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