posted by
rivers_bend at 02:42pm on 19/02/2008 under comment porn, dark angel, drabble, fan fiction, het, slash, threesome
Alec/Max/Logan, 265 words, Adult rated
Alec's gaze was focused on the leather-clad fingers twined next to Max's face. Max grabbing at Logan's hand, clinging, staring past Alec and up into his eyes. Logan's sweat dripped down Alec's ass, the bead rolling just faster than the bead of Alec's sweat that ran down Max's breast. Max's thighs were hot, burning against his hips as he pushed into her, making Logan's hips feel almost cool in comparison against his ass.
Alec wanted this, Max's slick heat, the burn of Logan's thrusts, but it was eating him up trying to have it all at once. He wanted Logan spread out underneath him, wanted to pound into his ass, devour his mouth, instead of leaning down to kiss Max with Logan's voice in his ear telling him to do it. Begging him to do it.
He wanted Max up against a wall in a dark corner, legs wrapped around his waist, fingers hard on the back of his head while she arched and moaned and fucked him so hard she bruised her ass on his hipbones.
He didn't think about how he wanted Logan to seek him out at the end of a long day fighting, to touch his knee, look at him and say, "Talk to me." Or how he wanted Max to come and find him when she was worried about Joshua.
Instead, he watched those gloved fingers twisting and gripping for one last moment before he closed his eyes and leaned down to kiss Max as requested, baring the tattoo at the back of his neck to Logan's teeth.
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Have you read
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And no, I haven't. But I'm not sure I can imagine any way they wouldn't be awesome. Hot as fire pairing and awesome writer? Not that I have time for them. but I shall find and bookmark them for when I do. *nods*
thank you *g*
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Hot.
Daaaaamn. That last sentence is just killer.
This is such a fantastic example of being able to condense a whole storyline into just a short drabble - awesome job. Damn.
I'll just. Uh. Bunk and all...Yeah. Phew.
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I do love a drabble sometimes. just that thing of a snapshot of something.
Glad it worked for you! *g*
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and thank you! If I succeed in making you watch, I will be thrilled!
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I liked this very much.
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It occurs to me that while Alec might feel like a third wheel, only included as a way for Max & Logan to be together despite the virus, it doesn't necessarily mean that *they* feel that way. No reason why they couldn't grow to care for him, however the relationship started out.
I doubt he'd understand that, though, unless they told him. It's easy to forget how *young* he is, and that he doesn't have the worldy experience the others do, despite his swift adaptation to being free of Manticore.
*thinks thinky thoughts*
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Also? Still incredibly hot. Yes. *smooch*
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hmmm...
you're probably right somehow *g*
and thank you sweetie!
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Hot, and wanty, and twisty-chest, and soooo good.
AND! I just got the Jensen season of DA on DVD. Now I just have to watch it....
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I'm so glad you liked this. It was fun *g*
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Glad you liked!
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thanks!
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AND OMG I AM SO EXCITED BY THE EXISTENCE OF THIS FICLET IT REQUIRES CAPSLOCK!
Er, sorry for the flailing. But Max/Alec/Logan is like the best threesome ever, and full of hot and angst, and I don't understand why nobody writes it because, as this piece shows, it is made of awesome. Alec as the intermediary between them here is just YES.
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And yay for that story. I just... The whole thing with the condoms just seemed so perfect somehow. Like back then when he'd gotten the out of date one he'd been hoping and then he was on hold for so long and then here he was hoping with Jared again, and yet, he was so surprised when Jared said he wanted it. This whole complicated thing summed up by an out of date condom and a new box. ♥
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I'm gonna have to explore more of your fic. :)
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Ah the back-burnered fics. I do so know about those. Though I try to finish what I start, between school and the next plot bunny, it doesn't always happen.
Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to comment!
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&hearts
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Okay, so, very hot drabble, love the imagery and the emotional needs of the different characters that come through loud and clear! Also, around now you're pobably starting to realize that I really *am* going to raid your complete sticky post. Hope you aren't sick of me yet. XD
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heeee. I have a long sticky post! I never get sick of lovely comments though. It's a huge compliment!