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posted by [personal profile] rivers_bend at 10:40am on 03/11/2007 under , , , ,
Title: Getting Lucky
Words: ~2800
Rating: Adult. Really, a lot.
Genre: Wincest Established Relationship
Characters: Sam/Dean
Warnings/Enticements: graphic wall!sex, rimming
Spoilers: not at all
Disclaimer: Our porn makes more people want to watch your show.
A/N: This is for all the people on my f'list who have a thing for Dean/Wall interfaces. Follows on from Down on your Luck. Thank you to [livejournal.com profile] lima_sierra for beta and the nod.
Summary: Dean gave Sam the smile. The one that said not only was he good, Sammy knew he was good, and he knew Sam knew it.


Getting Lucky

As luck would have it, when they woke up—legs cramped and heads aching from sleeping in the car—not twenty yards outside the windshield was a group of fishermen betting on knife throwing. While Sam scouted out the competition, Dean loosened the car-kinks in the complimentary campground shower, keeping his cast dry with a garbage bag and some duct tape.

"No contest," Sam said when Dean returned.

Before Sam was back from his own shower, Dean had $280 in his pocket. Amazing the slack people would cut you if you had a cast on your wrist. He might have to remember that. Nearly three hundred bucks was enough for gas to Nebraska, and a motel for the night if they weren't too picky. Not that they were ever all that picky.

Sam was quiet while Dean drove. Not bitch-face quiet. Smirking quiet. With frequent staring, licking of his lips, and adjusting his jeans.

"You okay there?" Dean finally asked, after two hundred miles or so. "There's a scenic overlook up ahead if you want me to stop."

Sam shifted in his seat again. "Nope. I'm all good."

The way he said it gave Dean the image of Sam all naked, and he was tempted to stop at the pull-out anyway. Sam must have seen something in Dean's eyes, because he said, "Uh unh. We can make it to Arkansas before dark. There's that nice motel in Waldron. Forty bucks a night. Thick walls." The look he gave Dean would have made an ice sculpture burst into flames.

Dean hoped the squeak he made was inaudible.

"Look." Sam pointed, bringing Dean back to earth. "Next gas fifteen miles." Sam's pointing hand landed on Dean's thigh. "Grab some snacks there and we don't have to stop again til supper." He talked like he had no idea his hand was sliding up Dean's leg, inches, inch, a hair's breadth from Dean's cock. "Two hundred fifty miles or so. You'll be alright til then. Right?" Now his fingers were curled around the swell of Dean's cock, squeezing, stroking, driving Dean insane, and Sam was still looking at him like they were honestly just talking about how far they would drive before stopping. Payback time for making Sam stay silent with his cock in Dean's mouth last night.

Fuck that.

"Oh, yeah. I'm good." Really, REALLY ignoring Sam's hand on his dick, Dean gave Sam the smile. The one that said not only was he good, Sammy knew he was good, and he knew Sam knew it. "We can drive straight through if you want. Hit the Roadhouse. See what Ash is up to. Say hey to Jo."

Sam didn’t skip a beat, just kept stroking, then slid his thumb between the buttons of Dean's fly, rubbing the thin cotton of Dean's boxers against his cock-head. "Up to you. You're driving."

Dean was pretty sure it was only his love for his baby that was keeping her on the road. It sure had nothing to do with coordination on his part; Sam had just about eradicated that with the little circles he was making with his thumb. Before Dean could beg or come or curse his brother, before he could do more than twitch his hips and clutch white-knuckled at the steering wheel, Sam pulled away and started digging through the box of tapes.

"You seen that Dark Side of the Moon tape I got in Clanton the summer after sophomore year?" He glanced at Dean. "You did keep it, didn't you?"

"I, um—" Dean hated that he had to clear his throat to continue. "Think Dad had it in his truck. Took it after…" He let a half-shrug-head-tilt say Stanford. Things were good between them. Hell, they were great. No need to bring up Sam leaving and Dad and all that shit.

Sam was obviously down with that, because he just said, "Why do you have three copies of Houses of the Holy?" Once he'd slotted one of them into the tape deck, he settled his hand on Dean's thigh again. Just high enough that Dean could feel the heat coming off his forearm on his still stiff cock. Sam let his fingers circle and rub so that Dean couldn't possibly ignore the fact he was there. The fifteen miles to their pit-stop felt like an eternity.

The burritos at the gas station were homemade, with whole beans and recognizable chicken, and that fact made Dean a hell of a lot less grumpy about the not stopping until they hit Waldron. The extra five minutes he took in the station's bathroom helped too, remembering the clutch of Sam's ass around his fingers as Dean'd fucked him open while some stranger washed his hands not five feet away. As easily as Sam came undone under Dean's tongue and hands however, when Sam was in the right mood, there was no doubt that he could cock-tease for eight hours, no problem. Dean wouldn't have made it to the Arkansas border, never mind half way up the state.

Sam backed off with the teasing after lunch, satisfying himself with the occasional squeeze of Dean's thigh and a few miles where he rested his hand on the back of Dean's neck. Dean's cock was aware of the pressure of Sam's fingers, but it kept its interest to a dull throb, rather than the fly-bursting routine it had been doing earlier. Mostly Sam kept busy with a pile of papers he pulled out of his bag, and digging thorough the tape box, grumbling, but choosing things he knew Dean liked when the tape they were listening to would get to its end.

The sun was just setting when they reached the Welcome to Waldron sign. "Think we need salt," Dean said. "And I know we need gas. How bout I drop you at the motel and you can get us a room while I go fill up?"

"You hungry?" The heat in Sam's eyes made Dean seriously consider skipping the trip to the gas station, but he didn't think he was going to be able to sleep knowing they were out of salt, and it was too ingrained in him not to leave the Impala running on fumes in case they had to make a quick getaway.

"We can, um, see about eating when I get back." Dean pulled into the motel lot.

Sam reached over and squeezed Dean's cock before grabbing the bags and heading for the office.

Five minutes to get to the gas station, ten minutes to fill the tank, and five minutes back. Sam was standing in the doorway of the end room, arm propped on the jam over his head, watching the lot. The lights were on in the room, casting Sam in silhouette, but Dean didn't have to see his face to read his expression. Supper, salt, everything that wasn't must. have. now. fled Dean's brain. He wasn't even sure he'd locked the Impala, and he couldn't have cared less.

Dean had it in the back of his mind that he would walk up, push Sam backwards until his legs hit the bed, that he'd fall on top of him, run hands over his arms and ribs, kiss his neck, rut against his hip… but that didn't work at all. Instead, Sam reached out long before Dean would have thought he was close enough, grabbed Dean by the lapels of his leather jacket, and yanked. Before Dean could do more than clutch Sam's wrist for support, Sam had him over the threshold, spun sideways, and slammed up against the wall.

What breath wasn't knocked out of him by the impact was being stolen by Sam's mouth, but Dean wasn't even sure that was what was making him dizzy. It was just as likely to be Sam's thigh thrust between his legs, the point of his hip pinning Dean's pelvis to the plaster, Sam's hands shoving Dean's jacket down off his shoulders, pushing up under his t-shirt, gripping at the skin on his back, pinching at his nipples—everywhere at once.

"Sam." Dean got a hand up and pushed his brother away long enough to drag air into his lungs. "Fuck."

"The plan," Sam said. The hands under Dean's shirt moved higher, bunching the fabric under his arms until he lifted them, and then higher still. Dean breathed again, and then again and then his hands were somehow bound in tight folds of his shirt, pinned to the wall above his head by one of Sam's huge paws.

Dean struggled, unable to believe that Sam had really captured him so easily, but the twists of cotton held him fast, caught on his cast and the point where his wrist widened to palm. Sam's grin was pure evil and it made Dean thrust his cock forward into the groove of Sam's hip. "My turn," Sam growled.

Not a chance Dean was gonna argue with that.

Without letting Dean's wrists go, Sam turned Dean around so he was facing the wall. With his free hand he started undoing Dean's fly as he ground his cock into Dean's ass. "Gonna fuck you so hard, Dean. You're gonna wish you had more to hold onto than that wall."

Dean said, "mmaagh," and didn't even know himself what he meant except it was probably something along the lines of Fuck, yes, get on with it.

When his jeans were undone and Sam's right hand was on his cock, Dean thought for a moment they weren't gonna get to the fucking. Every look and touch Sam had given him since he'd cleaned his pipes in the gas station rest room added up to too damn much foreplay to cope with. But Sam knew, somehow he knew, and the loose circle of his fist became a vise. "Not a chance," he said, and bit the back of Dean's neck.

"Sam," Dean said, and didn't even care that he sounded broken.

It wasn't until the shirt loosened around his wrist that Dean realized it had been twisted so tight the fingers of his right hand were tingling. He wriggled them as Sam bunched the spare fabric up and lowered Dean's arms a little. When Sam pushed the knotted cotton into his free fist, Dean automatically took it. "You gonna keep your hands there without me holding them?" The words contained the promise of something Dean desperately wanted if he said yes.

He said, "Yes."

Dean was almost comfortable now, forearms propped on the wall, forehead resting between them, wrists held together with his own grip on the cheap white t-shirt. The heat of Sam behind him and the play of Sam's fingers over the muscles of his back were keeping him on edge, however, and Dean was anything but relaxed. Sam's hands pushed below the waistband of his boxers and down, leaving Dean with denim and cotton bunched around his boot-tops. Which meant he couldn't spread his legs any wider to give Sam more room. Up against the wall, bound by his own clothes, Dean couldn't remember the last time his cock had been this hard. He could feel his ass clutching emptily on the absence of Sam.

But Sam was taking his time. Dean shut his eyes and tried not to beg as Sam's tongue and teeth and lips moved down his spine. He knew where his brother was headed, knew he couldn't take it, wanted nothing more.

"Dean," Sam said, on his knees now. "Your fucking ass should be illegal." He bit the offending item before spreading Dean's cheeks with both hands.

Crazy-desperate, and alarmed by the volume of his need and the puff of cold air on his exposed skin, Dean cringed away. But Sam just hooked fingers around his hipbones, held him open with his thumbs, and pulled him back until Dean was bent at the waist, ass exposed, ankles hobbled. "God, I want to taste you," Sam said. And then he did.

Long stripe first, from his asshole up to the small of Dean's back, and then Sam got closer. Used the point of his tongue to tease the skin at the base of Dean's scrotum. Again, when it made Dean whimper. Dean was pressing back now, wanting more pressure, more heat, more Sam. Just wanting. Sam used his teeth, nipped gently at the skin of Dean's perineum, and then pressed inwards with his tongue. Slow, wet, heat, with Dean's muscles letting go and giving way before it.

"I love it when you open up for me," Sam said, and then dove back in, licking, lapping, groaning into Dean's skin.

Dean lost track of what was happening, aware only of godsogood, until Sam's thumbs pierced him, pulled him open. Dean was nothing but the stretched rim of need that Sam was teasing with his tongue.

"Fuck. Fuck. Fuck." It was his mantra, his aching want, his only hope for the future.

Sam was standing, thumbs still fucking into him, holding him open and ready, and then Dean felt Sam's cock pushing in between them. Sloppy-wet when had he lubed his cock? Damn that distracting tongue of his. and huge. Burning like ice, like a brand, cockhead and knuckles stretching Dean wider than he thought possible. Then Sam's thumbs were sliding out and his cock was sliding in and it was just fullnessfrictionbliss for what felt like eternity.

"Yes, yes," morphed into "More, more," as Dean started to feel like he'd been on the edge forever. Sam was crashing into him, driving his face and chest into the wall as Dean fucked back just as hard. It was good. Too good. He wanted something else. Something more than Sam's fist around his cock. Something like—Oh God! Sam's fingers pushing at his asshole, skating around its edges until when he pushed back in with his cock, a finger slid in alongside it.

Time stopped. Sam's hips were tight against Dean's ass. Cock and finger buried deep. Then slowly, slowly, he pulled back until just his cockhead held Dean open. "More?" he whispered, and Dean nodded.

Impossibly, there was more. Two fingers this time, maybe even three, pushed in with Sam's cock. It felt like the universe.

"My god. Dean, my god." Sam sounded like he was crying and Dean realized his own face was wet. This was nothing like… nothing like anything ever. Exquisite. Heart-stopping. And then Sam was coming. Shuddering against Dean's back, hips jerking, breath ragged gasps against Dean's neck.

Fingers and cock pulled out of his ass, and Sam collapsed, pulling Dean down onto the floor with him; leaving carpet burn on his hip and elbow, his knee a little twisted, and cracking the back of his head on Sam's collarbone. Sam didn’t even seem to notice. He had one arm wrapped around Dean's neck and chest so Dean's head was pillowed on Sam's biceps. The other arm was around Dean's waist, hand fumbling for his brother's cock.

Dean wanted to say that it was ok, that he was so far beyond the need to come the whole idea seemed redundant, but then Sam found his grip and started stroking. Dean realized there was a place in all the sensation for that particular feeling, and that orgasm was closer than he'd thought.

Sometime later, Dean woke up shivering, wrist aching, stomach growling, and the back of his neck damp with Sam's drool. Sam's arms were still tight around his chest. "Sam," he said. "Sam. Wake up."

Sam's grip got tighter, until Dean couldn't breathe. Squeaking in an undignified manner, Dean twisted his head and bit Sam's arm. "Dude," he said when Sam loosened his grip. "Get off me. Need a shower and some food."

"Mmmm," Sam said. "Food." But he still didn't let go.

"Yes, food. But we can't do that until I shower, and I can't have a shower until you release me." Though Dean wasn't sure that was actually going to help much.

In the end, Sam not only had to sit up, but unlace Dean's boots, help him out of his clothes, and support him into the shower. If Dean's elbow slipped and poked Sam in the stomach when Sam accused him of getting old, surely no one was going to blame him. "Broken wrist, here," he said, but he was stiff and bone-weary too. The shower felt like heaven.

The café was only across the parking lot, but even that short walk gave Sam plenty of time to tease Dean about walking like John Wayne. "You'll shut the hell up right now," Dean said, "if you ever want your dick in my ass again."

Bastard just laughed.

But the way Sam watched him while he ate, the way his knee kept bumping Dean's under the table, confirmed what Dean suspected. That Sam was only teasing because he knew Dean was a lot more likely to tolerate that than whatever declarations of undying love Sam meant by it all. Dean didn’t say anything, but when they got in bed, he edged back into the circle of Sam's arms. He didn't even sigh when Sam said, "Thank you." Just squeezed Sam's hand and hooked his foot over his brother's ankle.
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posted by [personal profile] pie_andcoffee at 05:59pm on 03/11/2007
oh! MUST READ.

becuz Disclaimer! and, hey, it's You.

will comment after i'm done, heh.
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 06:50pm on 03/11/2007
hey, it's You.
thank you muchly for the huge compliment :D
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posted by [personal profile] sylvanwitch at 06:18pm on 03/11/2007
Oh. My. Gods.

*dies*

And...guh.

Am speechless. Really. Brain isn't functioning here. OMG.
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 06:34pm on 03/11/2007
*blushes, pleased* and admits that this one actually got to me while I was writing it, and that almost NEVER happens

So glad you liked! Thank you :D
 
posted by [identity profile] dreamlittleyo.livejournal.com at 06:34pm on 03/11/2007
God, baby, the LOVE in this. That and the hot. But the love is just... it's palpable between them, and that last paragraph is just so perfect. And I can just SEE Dean coming apart, and... god I love me some bossy, toppy Sam.

My slightly excessive list of favorite lines:
The way he said it gave Dean the image of Sam all naked, and he was tempted to stop at the pull-out anyway.
&
Sam was obviously down with that, because he just said, "Why do you have three copies of Houses of the Holy?"
(Just loved this detail--made me SO happy inside)
&
What breath wasn't knocked out of him by the impact was being stolen by Sam's mouth, but Dean wasn't even sure that was what was making him dizzy.
(god, SUCH a hot image. left me breathless)
&
"Gonna fuck you so hard, Dean. You're gonna wish you had more to hold onto than that wall."
(Hee!)
&
He could feel his ass clutching emptily on the absence of Sam.
&
"Fuck. Fuck. Fuck." It was his mantra, his aching want, his only hope for the future.
&
"You'll shut the hell up right now," Dean said, "if you ever want your dick in my ass again."
(happy snicker)
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 06:39pm on 03/11/2007
*happy happy sigh*

Thank you for your list. There is no such thing as too long :)

And yes, LOVE. It makes me happy. they do angst so pretty these boys, but I just adore how they do love. Whole-hearted, nothing can stop us, you're the fucking sexiest thing I've EVER seen and you're MINE, love.

*glee*
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posted by [identity profile] shezan.livejournal.com at 07:00pm on 03/11/2007
Disclaimer: Our porn makes more people want to watch your show.

Best. Disclaimer. EVAH.
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 07:02pm on 03/11/2007
*g*

thank you. And it's totally true. I know at least six people who never would have started watching Supernatural if it weren't for the fan fiction. And now they love it and tune in and buy the DVDs. So I'm hardly breaking the spirit of the copyright laws, which are to protect profits *g*
 
posted by [identity profile] pipry23.livejournal.com at 07:51pm on 03/11/2007
Sam was quiet while Dean drove. Not bitch-face quiet. Smirking quiet.

Oh, hi. Hot.

With frequent staring, licking of his lips, and adjusting his jeans.

"You okay there?" Dean finally asked, after two hundred miles or so. "There's a scenic overlook up ahead if you want me to stop."


Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmph. Sam's mood and the way that Dean notices just asdfasdlfkjsadbfiuasdfdsfadsfbbcxzv,mn. YUP. this is going to be good.

Sam's pointing hand landed on Dean's thigh.

HWEEEEEEEEEEEEEE. THATS SO HOT AND SO COUPLE-Y. ,mnzxcv.

"Two hundred fifty miles or so. You'll be alright til then. Right?" Now his fingers were curled around the swell of Dean's cock, squeezing, stroking, driving Dean insane, and Sam was still looking at him like they were honestly just talking about how far they would drive before stopping. Payback time for making Sam stay silent with his cock in Dean's mouth last night.

O_O Omg. you're next mission is to write that.

The one that said not only was he good, Sammy knew he was good, and he knew Sam knew it.

yesyesyeyseyseysyes

"We can drive straight through if you want. Hit the Roadhouse. See what Ash is up to. Say hey to Jo."

Sam didn’t skip a beat, just kept stroking, then slid his thumb between the buttons of Dean's fly, rubbing the thin cotton of Dean's boxers against his cock-head. "Up to you. You're driving."


Dear River. I was in a HORRIBLE HORRIBLE mood (roommate ate all of my food within two days homfg) and was seriously just so angry, and...this um this um omfg. Bad mood: *VANQUISHED* HORNY MOOD: OMG. THAT IS UNBELIEVABLY HOT.

"I, um—" Dean hated that he had to clear his throat to continue.

Oh, squee. *envisions this vividly*

The extra five minutes he took in the station's bathroom helped too, remembering the clutch of Sam's ass around his fingers as Dean'd fucked him open while some stranger washed his hands not five feet away.

Oh my God.

As easily as Sam came undone under Dean's tongue and hands however, when Sam was in the right mood, there was no doubt that he could cock-tease for eight hours, no problem.

A) That's fucking hot, and B) I love that...that seems really in character for Sam. dsahfugh omfg *dribbles thinking about it*

choosing things he knew Dean liked when the tape they were listening to would get to its end.

Heeee! I love them. EEEE. hehehehehehe oh them :) OH YOU. *squishes*

Dean had it in the back of his mind that he would walk up, push Sam backwards until his legs hit the bed, that he'd fall on top of him, run hands over his arms and ribs, kiss his neck, rut against his hip… but that didn't work at all. Instead, Sam reached out long before Dean would have thought he was close enough, grabbed Dean by the lapels of his leather jacket, and yanked. Before Dean could do more than clutch Sam's wrist for support, Sam had him over the threshold, spun sideways, and slammed up against the wall.

OH MY GOD OH MY GOD OH MY GOD OH MY GOD. I CANT CUT THAT PARAGRAPH DOWN ANY MORE, I MUST QUOTE THE WHOLE THING BECAUSE OH MY GOD. *CHOKES ON TONGUE* Just the fact that dean's all "HEH HEH I WILL RAVISH HIM" and then sam YANKS HIM (LEATHER JACKET LEATHER JACKET LEATHER JACKET YES YES FTW) and HOMGGG THE SPINNING AND THE SLAMMING AND THE WALL OFMGGSZ. (but the romantic in me thinks that maybe Dean automatically grabbing Sam's wrist for support is the hottest part of the whole thing)

It was just as likely to be Sam's thigh thrust between his legs, the point of his hip pinning Dean's pelvis to the plaster, Sam's hands shoving Dean's jacket down off his shoulders, pushing up under his t-shirt, gripping at the skin on his back, pinching at his nipples—everywhere at once.


*SPASMS* I GOT NO WORDS.

Breaching comment limit. TBC.
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 07:57pm on 03/11/2007
you're next mission is to write that.

already wrote it. this is the sequel to that very fic *g*

(link in header)
 
posted by [identity profile] pipry23.livejournal.com at 08:24pm on 03/11/2007
Sam's grin was pure evil and it made Dean thrust his cock forward into the groove of Sam's hip. "My turn," Sam growled.


Abuh.

"Gonna fuck you so hard, Dean. You're gonna wish you had more to hold onto than that wall."

Dean said, "mmaagh,"


!!!! I DONT KNOW IF I SHOULD LAUGH AT THE MMAAGH OR LIKE...HOLD ON TO MY PANTS.

But Sam knew, somehow he knew, and the loose circle of his fist became a vise. "Not a chance," he said, and bit the back of Dean's neck.

"Sam," Dean said, and didn't even care that he sounded broken.


i just. i can't. homg.

But Sam was taking his time. Dean shut his eyes and tried not to beg as Sam's tongue and teeth and lips moved down his spine. He knew where his brother was headed, knew he couldn't take it, wanted nothing more.


...YYYEEESSSS.

But Sam just hooked fingers around his hipbones, held him open with his thumbs, and pulled him back until Dean was bent at the waist, ass exposed, ankles hobbled.

Hottest image ever? omg.

"I love it when you open up for me," Sam said, and then dove back in, licking, lapping, groaning into Dean's skin.

holy fuck. the word lapping drives me nuts. sakdjfsadsf in a very good way omg. it's just one of those words that makes you hear it. ooomfg.

Sam was crashing into him, driving his face and chest into the wall as Dean fucked back just as hard.

adsfbdsfsdaflkjsdf.sldfkj

"My god. Dean, my god." Sam sounded like he was crying and Dean realized his own face was wet. This was nothing like… nothing like anything ever. Exquisite. Heart-stopping.

Oh, guh. They just love each other so much omfg. thank you for including this moment because..aaagugughhh.

and cracking the back of his head on Sam's collarbone. Sam didn’t even seem to notice. He had one arm wrapped around Dean's neck and chest so Dean's head was pillowed on Sam's biceps. The other arm was around Dean's waist, hand fumbling for his brother's cock.

I do not know if i can take much more! O_O *but does so gladly omg!*

In the end, Sam not only had to sit up, but unlace Dean's boots, help him out of his clothes, and support him into the shower

eeeeeeeeeeee <33333333

but even that short walk gave Sam plenty of time to tease Dean about walking like John Wayne. "You'll shut the hell up right now," Dean said, "if you ever want your dick in my ass again."


HEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE <33333333333333

Just squeezed Sam's hand and hooked his foot over his brother's ankle.

Oh my gosh. Fucking perfect way to end. omg. At the end of the day, they seriously just love each other, and you were building that love up throughout the whole fic, and then sadlfkjasdf that last bit asbdfiuasdbf good heavens. This was so good. And I'm sorry I missed the first part--I'll be reading that next! Thanks for sharing this!!
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 08:34pm on 03/11/2007
*squees and twirls over your lovely commentary comment*

but especially squees over
Dean said, "mmaagh,"

!!!! I DONT KNOW IF I SHOULD LAUGH AT THE MMAAGH OR LIKE...HOLD ON TO MY PANTS.

Because I totally was aiming for something that would be ridiculous and also hot. I exactly wanted that reaction. that HAHAHA...um. I mean, GUH. So I am feeling filled with win at the moment.

*snuggles you*

*clings to comment, like, woah*

and I hope you enjoy part one!
 
posted by [identity profile] luvsabitch.livejournal.com at 09:51pm on 03/11/2007
Dean!Wall is always hot, but this was off the top of the hotness scale. This reduced me to wibbling heap!
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 09:58pm on 03/11/2007
Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed!
 
posted by [identity profile] fromyourashes.livejournal.com at 09:56pm on 03/11/2007
Every single time I read something of yours, I think, "Oh, this is my favorite thing she's written."

Every time.

Dude - Fucking hot.

Sam didn’t skip a beat, just kept stroking, then slid his thumb between the buttons of Dean's fly, rubbing the thin cotton of Dean's boxers against his cock-head.

Do you KNOW how hot that is?

Sam was standing in the doorway of the end room, arm propped on the jam over his head, watching the lot. The lights were on in the room, casting Sam in silhouette

That right there is one of the sexiest visions EVER TIMES A BILLIONTY.

It wasn't until the shirt loosened around his wrist that Dean realized it had been twisted so tight the fingers of his right hand were tingling. He wriggled them as Sam bunched the spare fabric up and lowered Dean's arms a little. When Sam pushed the knotted cotton into his free fist, Dean automatically took it. "You gonna keep your hands there without me holding them?" The words contained the promise of something Dean desperately wanted if he said yes.

He said, "Yes."


This? SO MUCH LOVE. There's a moment of complete understanding when Sam notices Dean's numbness, and then total trust when Dean grabs the cloth, and then OMG LUST with the OMG. Just... "He said, 'Yes'."

Nngn, freal.

But then you did this:
Something more than Sam's fist around his cock. Something like—Oh God! Sam's fingers pushing at his asshole, skating around its edges until when he pushed back in with his cock, a finger slid in alongside it.


And I had to take me a little breakypoo.

0.o

CUZ FUCK.
 
posted by [identity profile] fromyourashes.livejournal.com at 09:57pm on 03/11/2007
(pip's comment style is rubbing off on me. i'm never gonna have time to READ porn anymore cuz i'll be too busy COMMENTING on it. lmfao)
 
posted by [identity profile] timbershiver.livejournal.com at 11:16pm on 03/11/2007
Oh wow!

I've had one of the most stressful weeks ever, but I've just read this three times and now I feel much better!

(Porn helps the pain of life go away!)

"Dean," Sam said, on his knees now. "Your fucking ass should be illegal." Damn straight, Sam!
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 11:21pm on 03/11/2007
Yay for stress-melting porn! :D

I'm so glad I could help.

I have to admit, Sam was kinda my Mary-Sue with that line. Cos fucking hell, that boy has a fine arse.
 
posted by [identity profile] silsbee329.livejournal.com at 11:20pm on 03/11/2007
This story + my desperation!kink = GUH.

And the ending was perfect - sweet, but not too sweet. Just right. ;)

 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 11:27pm on 03/11/2007
Yay! Thank you, honey. I totally have a desperation!kink too. Love needy boys :D

And I'm glad it came across as not too sweet. Cos they aren't the sweet-talkingest boys, despite how much they love each other.
 
posted by [identity profile] flawedamythyst.livejournal.com at 11:30pm on 03/11/2007
Aw, BOYS. I love this - so hot, so awesome, so much love and joy and wonder. Thank you.
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 11:37pm on 03/11/2007
Thank you, sweetie. You are most welcome. Glad you liked!
 
posted by [identity profile] victorian-tweed.livejournal.com at 11:44pm on 03/11/2007
Oh thank you, Goddess of teh Porn! A perfect start to my day! *hugs*
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 11:49pm on 03/11/2007
*hugs you*

I'm glad I could help start your day off right. :D
 
posted by [identity profile] runedgirl.livejournal.com at 03:41am on 04/11/2007
Unghhh Sarah, this image just rendered me totally inarticulate for like ten minutes:

"Crazy-desperate, and alarmed by the volume of his need and the puff of cold air on his exposed skin, Dean cringed away. But Sam just hooked fingers around his hipbones, held him open with his thumbs, and pulled him back until Dean was bent at the waist, ass exposed, ankles hobbled."

I got to the 'ankles hobbled' and my knees just went weak. Good thing I was sitting down at the time. LOL

I'm so fucking pleased to be one of the very smart (if I don't say so myself) people on your flist who begged you for some Dean/Wall, cuz damn....you never disappoint.

Happy now,
Lynsey
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 03:44am on 04/11/2007
So glad the wall!sex hit the spot! :D I have to say, that the idea of Dean all bound up in his own clothes was quite appealing to me too ;)

Thank you for always saying the nicest things ♥
 
posted by [identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/_ravengirl/ at 03:54am on 04/11/2007
linked here by [livejournal.com profile] pipry23

ummmmmmm yeah that was hot. holy. *whimpers*
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 03:55am on 04/11/2007
I'm so glad you liked! Thank you :D

and for saying how you came to be here, cos i'm all nosey like that ;)
 
posted by [identity profile] milady1844.livejournal.com at 07:45am on 04/11/2007
*is broken*

Guh. More hotness. Wicked, amazing & hot hot hot.

Must return to bunk.
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 01:22pm on 04/11/2007
Two bunks in a row? SCORE! *g*

Thanks, honey.
 
posted by [identity profile] thehighwaywoman.livejournal.com at 01:47pm on 04/11/2007
Damn, but I love starting off a lazy Sunday by reading 1) a hot fic 2) a hot wall-sex fic 3) all of the above written the way you write them.

In other words, this was awesome! I love the continuity between this story and the last one. Sam's cockteasing. Dean's plans that go so very awry and how he's cool with that. The brotherly banter and snark. YUM.

And now I kinda want a burrito. ^_^
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 01:53pm on 04/11/2007
*curses coding* (sorry, one last time and if it still doesn't work, I give up)
Yay! I'm so glad I could help improve the lazy Sunday morning even further :D

There was almost a huge error in continuity, first draft I forgot Dean had a broken wrist

Yeah, Dean doesn't much like it when his plans go awry, except when it's sex and Sam's plan is even better ;)

and oh yeah, on the burrito. Day I wrote it I'd had that burrito, but now you mention it, I'm wanting another one.
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posted by [personal profile] deanshot1 at 03:26pm on 04/11/2007
That was delicious.
My God, I think my brain oozed out my ears as Sam had Dean pinned against the wall and then when he went down on his knees well I just passed out from the sheer Hotness of it.
Just Excellent, I must say.
Thanks for sharing.
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 03:32pm on 04/11/2007
Thank YOU for commenting! I'm so glad you liked :D
 
posted by [identity profile] sparklinblossom.livejournal.com at 03:52pm on 04/11/2007
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I am all for the wall!sex!!!!!
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 03:55pm on 04/11/2007
Yay! Thank you :D

Wall!sex is good. Glad you liked.
 
posted by [identity profile] lbmisscharlie.livejournal.com at 04:50pm on 04/11/2007
Oh.My.God. This is ridiculously, amazingly hot. And your disclaimer? So true, that's how I got into Supernatural!
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 05:03pm on 04/11/2007
Yay! More converts-by-pron. There are so many of us *g*

Thank you for commenting. Glad you liked!
 
posted by [identity profile] motherlyclucker.livejournal.com at 04:56pm on 04/11/2007
nnngh
*mind is stolen*
*discovers you have taken it to use all my smut fantasies*
*pouts*
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 05:05pm on 04/11/2007
*hands brain back*

*gives cookies*

Thanks :D
 
posted by [identity profile] purridot.livejournal.com at 05:10pm on 04/11/2007
There is nothing I could say here that would properly express the extreme WOW of this story...
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 05:12pm on 04/11/2007
WOW works for me :D So very glad you liked it.
 
posted by [identity profile] nachekana.livejournal.com at 05:11pm on 04/11/2007
Wow, I loved every line of your fic! First, the teasing (maybe my favorite part, I just love your sneaky!Sam!), then the sex (I have to agree: Dean+wall=guh) and then, the love. Gosh, the love...*sighs*

That goes directly in my memories!
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 05:14pm on 04/11/2007
Thank you so much! *grins*

Teasing!Sam is joy, isn't he? *pets him*

I'm so glad you enjoyed it. *grins more*
 
posted by [identity profile] joyofreading.livejournal.com at 05:13pm on 04/11/2007
Glad to see the continuing story. I am glad Dean's luck seemed to get better.

Enjoyed the loving as well.
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 05:16pm on 04/11/2007
Thank you! Kripke seems so keen on sending bad things Dean's way, I had to give him something good. *g*

Glad you enjoyed!
 
posted by [identity profile] thelinus.livejournal.com at 05:47pm on 04/11/2007
so, so good. guhh. and i have a thing for crying during sex (i don't know why) so yes, mmmm. hothot.
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 05:59pm on 04/11/2007
I think for me it's partly that sex so intense you have to bleed some of it off by crying thing. Plus, no one weeps prettier than Dean Winchester :)

thank you for reading! glad you liked. *g*
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posted by [identity profile] spae.livejournal.com at 06:44pm on 04/11/2007
tasty hot
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 12:48am on 05/11/2007
Why, thank you! *g*
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