SPN 2.5 drabble no spoilers [rivers

So.

jelloh0530 meme'd here, the pertinent bit of which is:

6. Do you think the boys still bother with training or its all on the job now?
Good freaking question. I hope they're still training. In wife-beaters. With Bowie knives. In the darkest dregs of the Bayou. Ummm hmmm. Sweaty. Dripping. Grunting. Tackling and landing hard on the damp ground, dusk just beginning to come on, soft and all pink around them, and the weeping willow fronds brushing their glistening skin. Dean will lean down over Sam and....

Yeah. It made pron come. She said I could re-post it here.
Knife Fight
Teen rated for sexual swearing (or adult rated for incest if you're of a mind)and I mean of a mind to rate incest as adult. you don't need any squinting to see the incest in this one
250 words

"Mother-fucker!" Sam was not happy. "Dean, that was my last undershirt."

"Yeah," Dean said. "Well." It was hard to be repentant when Sam's shirt being sliced off him meant it was, well, off him. Leaving Sam's torso covered in nothing but sweat, mud, and that little smear of blood where the knife had nicked his shoulder accidentally. What? It was totally an accident.

"You better buy me some more." Sam pointed his knife at Dean in what was maybe meant to be some sort of threatening gesture. If it was, it was wasted, cos all it did was make Dean want to get on with the fucking.

"Uh huh," Dean said. He was wondering what Sam would do if Dean used his knife to cut off Sam's jeans as well. Wasn't a good idea probably. Denim was tough, and there were delicate bits that Dean had other plans for.

"Are you even listening to me?"

"Nope. Thinking that patch of ground over there looks like a pretty good place to fuck you."

"Oh," Sam said. Like he hadn't even considered it. Which, whatever. Dean was wearing a tank top too, and the jeans that totally showed off his ass, and if Sam hadn't been thinking about tapping that...

Dean caught Sam's smirk. Bitch. He'd totally been thinking about it. Sam reached out and gripped the neck of Dean's shirt in his left fist and brought his knife up again. Dean tried to keep his hips still as Sam sliced through the cotton.

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Oh, FABULOUS, darling. I just love your turns of phrase, the casual way the whole thing feels, the phrasing of things that aren't dialog that put the reader right there in Dean's headspace. LOVED this line:
Leaving Sam's torso covered in nothing but sweat, mud, and that little smear of blood where the knife had nicked his shoulder accidentally. What? It was totally an accident.

Perfect visual and atmospheric all at the same time. So. Much. Love.

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Aww, thank you honey! Dean's headspace makes me totally happy. Well, his I'm in love with my brother and we have hot sex at all hours and life is sweet, space. *g*

And, visual and atmospheric makes me totally happy as well *smishes you tight*

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God, the image of Dean trying to keep his hips still...Jesus. While Sam sliced his fucking cotton shirt with a knife.

Yeah.

that was the one that did it for me, I have to say. Dean's fucking hips just twitching towards Sam, out of control with the hot of Sam manhandling him and cutting his shirt off.

um, yeah.

God yes. Dean + hips is a killer combo.

Sometimes I get so caught up in the angst I forget what an amzing place hot!sweet is!

This is really good, my only criticism is it's not long enough!

I'm going to go and lie down down and think of them slicing each others clothes off!

I am exactly the same! Oh, the taboo, oh the secret lust, oh, the emo and angst! And I love them. But DAMN, I love the hot!sweet as well.

I'm so glad you liked! It was just a bit of comment porn. I am planning a continuation of Down on your Luck though, because I have a jones for more of the hot!sweet before I dive back into the UST and angst.

#1 - Every time you stop before the porn happens, god kills a kitten.

#2 - top!Dean! (this was likely not your intention, but whatever, let me have my fantasy) I mean, whatever, they probably switch it off, but as far as I'm concerned, Sam is totally a big ol' bottom.

#3 - Boys in wifebeaters--DO WANT. Seriously, the SHOULDERS on those boys? Yowza. *fans self*

All in all? quite a bit in a small package.

~Djinn

#1 It was just a little bit of comment porn. or comment foreplay. I have fics to write! ;)

#2 I am always fascinated by who thinks Sam is a bottom and who thinks Dean is. (I'm in the Dean camp.) Really though, they are both tops and both bottoms in my view. I love it when they are both being all toppy until one of them breaks and begs to be fucked.

#3 Yes. DO WANT. *nods*

So glad you like my package!

;)

Foreplay! With knives! *g* You totally win :) *hugs*

*hugs back*

jelloh started it, I just took it to its logical... middle :D

There needs to be more foreplay with knives in this fandom. *votes*

Oh... delicious.

Dean caught Sam's smirk. Bitch.

ha!! :-D

that icon never fails to make me giggle :D

glad you liked! Thank you!

*is all filled with !! this morning*

Holy cats 'n jams this is hot! The last line? Hot-hot-hot!

Thank you! Yes, Dean's hips never fail to please ;)

Guh. Just...guh.

My gods, but that sends my head in all sorts of non-work-related directions. And I'm supposed to be working. *sighs* Papers to grade, letters to write...

Guh...

*hands glass of cold water and the concentration pills*

Thank you, honey. Sorry to have interrupted your work wit gratuitous pronage.

*g*

Yes yes yes YES! More of that. I'm in love with your Dean because he's just like canon!Dean except he's fucking his brother without breaking character and that's just all kinds of awesome.

The only thing I don't like is the term wifebeater because it's a horrible name for something as innocent as an item of clothing and IT'S A VEST FOR GOD'S SAKE! Damn you Americans and your confusing words for things. Took me months to figure out what they were :~).

I can't tell you how much it makes me grin to hear my Dean is just like canon!Dean. Except, yeah. with the fucking. There should be more fucking. Except then some people would stop watching and the ratings would go down and there would be no show.

So fan fic. there should be more fan fic!

I think the maple syrup has gone to my head

I love the sharp back and forth dialogue -- it really sounds like thrusting and parrying. The last line is somehow perfect, and cuts away at the most tantalizing moment!

Yay! thank you! I'm so glad that Dean's thinking didn't get in the way of the sharpness of the dialogue. I can't resist writing him like that. And I love when text and subtext are congruent :D

thank you again *g*

Nnngph. Omg. Last line. Oofah.

I'll be in my bunk.

For some reason the contrast between that little hedgehog and the bunked sentiment cracks me up. completely. :D

Yeah. Dean. twitching hips. Sam with knife.

It all works.

...

Dean tried to keep his hips still as Sam sliced through the cotton.

..Holy shit. I have to go shower now.

i love your brain.

hehe! yeah. You'd totally be humping the air if Sam was cutting your shirt off you while he was all sweaty and streaked with mud and blood...

Thank you! I'm so glad you love my brain *twirls*

if Sam was cutting your shirt off you while he was all sweaty and streaked with mud and blood

OH MY FUCKING GOD. *RACES TO SHOWER OMFGGGGG*

There needs to be more delightful 'boys sparring/physically fighting/wrestling' fics. And knife!porn.

And boys in wifebeaters. I might've experienced a little short-circuiting of the brain thanks to that graphic.

Thank you for posting this! It was a perfectly porny ficlet to read, lacking the attention span to concentrate on longer fics! :D

*hugs*

You are very welcome! Thank you for reading! I do love a well done porny drabble, myself. Not that I kept this one to 100 words, but ach well...

um, are we not supposed to be fetishizing the boys? *shifty eyes*

Next in the bunny queue is up-against-the-wall sex. But I need to write my essay first. And my other essay. And then the boys can come and play some more.

I've been known to molest that drabble = 100 or less words rule. A lot. Repeatedly. *headdesk*
So I don't think anyone complains. ;)

Fetishizing the boys is a given, but I'm getting my panties in a twist over their damn clothes. And other accessories.

Up against the wall sex?
*fights her way to the front of the line*
Yes, please, now!

*hands you back-stage passes*

As you are one of the people for whom I am writing said up-against-the-wall sex, I am glad you are pleased! :D

and, um, the clothes make the man? or something?

which totally reminds me of a song: they say the clothes make the man, but the woman makes the clothes, so what does that make the woman?

Clothes do make the man. Even when they're wearing women's panties. ;)

Would you mind terribly if I tried to create a quasi-manip based on this ficlet? Because we've got pictures of Jared in a wifebeater, and we've got screencaps of Dean in a wifebeater and

dreamlittleyo who's introduced us to the whole concept of quasi-manips... and I've found my tablet and my graphics programs. And the picture of the boys, dirty, sweaty, blades in hands is just too damn sweet to ignore... *dreams*

Backstage Pass to wall-slamming sex! Yes!
Dean/Wall is just as completely, utterly OTP as Sam/Laptop or Sam/Asphyxiation. ;) And it's all good.

mind terribly? I'd squee with squeeing happy! Cos the boys in vest tops (reverts to queen's english) is sexy as a sexy beast, and GAH! Plus, if it inspired more people to write dirty/sweaty/knife fics... ALL GOOD!

He was wondering what Sam would do if Dean used his knife to cut off Sam's jeans as well.

um... yes, please *G* LMAO! and OF COURSE Sam was thinking about it... it's Dean! ;) Loved this! Thanks for the read ♥

and on another note 'cause I didn't want to take up

jelloh0530's LJ, I thought I friended you when I left the comment for your other fic :) but thank you for enabling me with that canymountain!crack... LOL *waves*

hee, yeah, poor jelloh, we did totally take over her journal ;)

Sam was totally thinking about it. Indeed. Of course. Cos, hello, Dean!

thank you for reading!

Oooh, awesome. Mmmmm....outdoors!knife sex...

Thank you :D

yeah, I was pretty much thinking mmmm when I read jelloh's 6

Mmm. That is seriously tasty. I love the imagery. Also, the thing I love best about our show is how often they are sweaty and dirty and panting and... *pants*

Um. Sorry. *grins*
♥

no need to apologise! I think that is something we all love best about the show. :D

thank you for reading honey.

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Yep, I did write that :) It's right here (http://rivers-bend.livejournal.com/368778.html) called 'Verses of yours and mine, and it's in the 'standalone' section of my stickypost :D

oh wow :o nice kink. Very nice. Hmmmm....! *gets all good-image-vibes*

thank you!

I love blade kink, but I tend to leave it to others who write it better. Sometimes I gotta play though :D

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