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posted by [personal profile] rivers_bend at 02:07pm on 25/10/2007 under , , , ,
Title: Down on your luck
Words: ~2600
Rating: Adult
Genre: Wincest Established Relationship
Characters: Sam/Dean
Warnings/Enticements: PWP
Spoilers: nope
Disclaimer: our porn makes more people want to watch your show.
A/N: Written for [livejournal.com profile] merihn who is down on her luck this week.
Thank you to [livejournal.com profile] sylvanwitch and [livejournal.com profile] sadelyrate for hand-holding and [livejournal.com profile] lima_sierra for beta.
Summary: "You've got a filthy mouth," Sam said, before licking it…


Down on your Luck

Dean was feeling down on his luck. Broke his left wrist when he got thrown through a window by a really pissed off poltergeist, so a game of pool wasn't gonna work. His last two credit cards had been declined not once, but twice, which was always a pretty good sign that it was about damn time to hit the post office box, but the Visa for Mr. Stephen Ray was in Nebraska, and he and Sam were down in Baton Rouge. The game of cards he'd found was going well until the man with the mother-of-pearl handled pistol accused Dean of stowing an Ace in his cast. He totally hadn't, but Dean had this policy where he didn't argue with armed drunk eccentrics. Not over a game of cards. Not when the other five men at the table were the drunk's friends.

So Dean had nothing but a shot of Whiskey, six bucks, and an itch so bad on the back of his wrist that he was about to smash the cast right off to get to it. Where the fuck was Sam when he needed him?

The hand that landed on his shoulder was heavy and hearty, the clap of a good buddy, but the thumb that dipped under his collar was pure Sam. Soothing and sexy at the same time. "Sammy," Dean said, so glad to see him it was an ache in his chest.

Sam's smile was tired. "I managed to get us half a tank."

Yeah. That was the other thing. They had no hotel room and the Impala's tank was empty. This hunt sucked.

"Your card was good?"

"Nah," Sam said. "Gave some woman in a Jag a sob story about how I was this poor scholarship student and I just found out my brother had cancer and I was trying to get home to Kansas to see him, but I didn't have enough money for gas. She gave me twenty bucks."

Dean felt a flare of jealousy. "What'd you have to do for her?"

"What?" Sam looked incredulous. "Nothing, man. What do you think I am?"

Dean leaned forward until he was speaking right into Sam's ear. "I think you're mine." It was everything he could do not to lay claim right there with his palm, but this was definitely not that kind of bar.

"Looks like we're sleeping in the car tonight, so you'll have to take a rain check."

No way was Dean that down on his luck. "Dude, the bathrooms in here? Totally clean." He had his lips right up against Sam's ear, and he could feel Sam's shiver in the brush of hair on his cheek.

Sitting back on his stool, Dean watched Sam look around the bar. He could practically hear Sam thinking, Why does Dean only want to fuck in redneck joints and biker bars? That one place in West Hollywood would have been perfect, and he made us go back to the hotel. But he was teetering, Dean could tell. It'd been three days, and since they'd started this, Sam had been hell-bent on making up for all that lost time when he'd sworn off sex after Jess. Thirty-six hours was usually his limit.

"Come on. I'll suck you til you're begging and then fuck you hard and slow, just how you like it." Dean was leaning in close again. Not too close, just a guy trying to talk to his friend over the music. From his vantage point he had a perfect view of that muscle in Sam's jaw twitching with the effort of not saying Fuck, yes.

Sam kept his eyes on the row of bottles behind the bar and just said, "Is it in the back?"

"Through that door and turn left. Stall by the window." Oh, yeah.

Dean finished his drink and left his last single under the glass for the bartender. Tried to keep the I'mma gonna get laid saunter down to a minimum as he followed in his brother's footsteps.

He hadn't been lying to get into Sam's pants. The bathroom was remarkably clean. Dean hoped that didn't mean there was going to be a guy with a mop popping along to interrupt them. A balding man in a shiny green suit straight off the mafia-pimp costume rail was washing his hands. Dean headed towards the urinals against the wall, exaggerating the difficulty his cast gave him undoing his fly to give the guy time to leave. As soon as the door shut behind Mr. Green, Dean tapped on the end stall. Sam let him in.

"You've got a fucking filthy mouth," Sam said, before licking it, erasing any chance Dean might have had to answer. The next thing he said might have been "Three days," but he was working Dean's lower lip with his teeth at the time so it was a little unclear.

"Just fucking kiss me," Dean said. Sam did.

In the nick of time, Dean remembered his cast and only brought his right hand up to grip Sam's head. Sam had him pressed up against the cold metal of the stall, his heavy heat solid against Dean's chest and thighs. Hips rocking, rubbing his cock in the groove of Dean's hip, making those little noises in the back of his throat that told Dean if he wanted to do more than watch Sam come in his pants, he'd better get on with it.

When Sam moved to bite and suck along Dean's jaw, Dean said something that he hoped was, "Suck you now," and pushed Sam away. Which killed him, but they were in a bathroom stall, and they could save the making out for the back seat later.

Sam had no problem getting with the program if the speed he was going at his belt and fly was anything to go by. Dean was barely on his knees before Sam's cock was rubbing up against his cheek. "Want it?" Sam said. He stroked its length along Dean's stubble and then pulled back to rub the tip on Dean's lips.

"Mine," Dean told him and pushed Sam's hand away, gripping Sam's shaft himself. "Mine," he said again, licking the taste of his brother into his mouth.

Dean thought of the tricks he'd learned over the years as his arsenal. Same as he knew which gun, which bullets, which blade to pull out of the trunk to get each job done, he didn’t have to think any more about what to do with his mouth and hands to get what he wanted out of Sam. The get him off quick when he was so hard it hurt blow job, had moaning, lots of spit, and fingers pressing right behind Sam's balls. The Sammy Special—and no, Sam didn’t know Dean called it that, and he wasn’t finding out—aka the keeps Sam on the edge for ages until his orgasm sneaks up on him and hits him so hard he passes out blow job had kissing, suction a hoover would be proud of, little flicks of his tongue, long slow strokes of his fingers, and a sixth sense that told him just when to stop everything and do nothing but breathe over Sam's flushed skin.

This was a suck til he begs to be fucked blow job though, and for that Dean needed a tight grip at the base of Sam's cock and a hot, slick mouth for Sam to thrust into. Usually it would also include fingers pressing into Sam's ass, but Dean was one handed at the moment, and he thought the firm grip was more important. Sam never wanted to be fucked just after he'd come.

When Sam went stiff, Dean was afraid he'd been too eager and that Sam was going to come in his mouth, but then he heard the snick of the door shutting and the footsteps coming towards them. Sam was mouthing, "STOP" at him, but Dean, just slow as anything, kept his mouth moving over the head of Sam's cock. Pushed down until the crown was stretching his soft palate, and then backed off until it was tucked behind Dean's teeth. Squeezed a little tighter, licked, and then pushed down again.
Sam was holding his breath, and the only sound was the stranger's piss hitting porcelain. Dean had his eyes locked on his brother's face and would have been grinning were it not for the fact that his lips were otherwise occupied. The fingers gripping his shoulders weren't doing anything remotely like pushing him away. Fortunately the guy was a filthy pig who didn’t bother washing his hands, and he was gone again before Sam suffocated himself.

"Christ, Dean, fuck me now," Sam said, when he'd gotten his breath back.

Dean blessed the club in New Orleans that had fishbowls full of condoms and little sachets of lube right there on the bar. Pocket-friendly packaging that meant he was always prepared. He thought for a second that Dad would be proud, realized the context, and decided that thought could go wherever it was bad, unhelpful thoughts went.

The trouble with the little packets was that there wasn't as much to go around. Dean put on the condom first, while Sam was turning towards the wall and pushing his jeans and boxers down over his hips. Pressing up against Sam's back, Dean whispered, "I'm short on hands here. Hold yourself open for me." When Sam complied it was enough to make Dean breathless.

"Come on, Dean. Fuck me already," Sam said, and pulled himself wider.

"Fuck." Dean got his dick right up against Sam's hole, fumbled the open lube between two fingers of his plastered hand, and managed to slick Sam, his good fingers and his cock all at once. "Who 'da man," he muttered.

"Wha—" Sam started, but Dean slid two fingers into his ass and he never finished the thought.

"You're so hot. So hot for me. God, Sam—" The door opened again, and Dean busied his mouth sucking a bruise into the top of Sam's back to keep himself quiet. It wasn’t doing much for Sam's ability to stay silent, but that wasn't Dean's problem. Sam put his arm up and rested his head on it, biting his wrist when Dean angled his fingers just right and kept stroking. Sam didn't need to say, I'm so getting you back for this, it was coming through loud and clear. Dean bit harder to keep from laughing.

This guy, of course, was Mr. OCD. Washing, scrubbing, doing fuck knew what while Dean slicked two fingers, and then three, in and out of Sam's ass. Finally, after about three years of drying to finish off his decade at the sink, the guy left. Dean pulled his fingers out, splashed the rest of the lube onto his cock, and slid in while Sam said, "Now. Now. Now," in a harsh voice.

Dean cursed his cast, and after some debate, rested it against the small of Sam's back, wrapping his other hand around Sam's cock. He was pretty sure he wasn't going to be able to keep his promise of hard and slow. Not with Sam slamming back into him and wrapping his own fingers around Dean's, speeding up the strokes on his cock. Dean obliged, fucking with abandon and just going along for the ride as Sam jerked his own dick.

When Dean came, he nearly lost his balance, not having a hand to hold on with, but managed to catch himself with the crook of his elbow at Sam's waist and his cheek on Sam's back. "Do it, Sam. Fuck. Come all over my fingers."

Just sometimes? Sam did as he was told.

They were cleaned up and drying their hands before the next person came in. When he sniffed pointedly and glared at them, Dean cracked up. Sam had to drag him out of the bathroom by his arm.

When they were safe in the car, Sam finally cracked a smile. "There's a campground 'bout twenty miles from here. Five bucks a night for cars, free showers. Tomorrow we can find you another poker game or something. Sound good?"

Sounded good. Dean had half a tank of gas, five dollars in his pocket, and the best fucking brother in the world. Pun definitely intended. His luck was looking up.

Read On
Mood:: 'horny' horny
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posted by [identity profile] victorian-tweed.livejournal.com at 09:25pm on 25/10/2007
HAH! This is *so* sending me off to work with a smile on my face!! Hot and cheeky and wonderful, River.

*buys Dean a WristStrong bracelet*

Also, best disclaimer ever!
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 09:39pm on 25/10/2007
Thank you, honey, I'm glad you liked!

Also, best disclaimer ever!
*g*
Well, it's true.
 
posted by [identity profile] mickeym.livejournal.com at 09:46pm on 25/10/2007
Dude. That? Was just fucking *smoking*. Guh. Also? I love the way you write Dean. Snarky SOB, isn't he? *g* *happy sigh* Thanks for sharing this with us. I needed it, after an afternoon of mouthy kid :)
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 09:50pm on 25/10/2007
So glad you approve! I love dean like crazy, and I've missed him, all the writing about Sam I've been doing.

You are more than welcome! and thank you for stopping by to read!
 
posted by [identity profile] fleshflutter.livejournal.com at 10:00pm on 25/10/2007
That was way too hot to be allowed. You are awesome. :)
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 10:04pm on 25/10/2007
Yay! I'm awesome! *g*

Thank you. Glad I could bring you the hot.
 
posted by [identity profile] luvsabitch.livejournal.com at 10:13pm on 25/10/2007
Oh for goodness sake woman! You can't keep doing this to me, this was so hot I'm gonna need a cold shower! Poor Dean with his poorly wrist, but I agree - he does have the best fucking brother in the world!
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 10:17pm on 25/10/2007
um... sorry?

Thank you for reading, honey. Glad you liked.
 
posted by [identity profile] trueshellz.livejournal.com at 10:15pm on 25/10/2007
I LOVE IT!!!!!
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 10:18pm on 25/10/2007
Yay! I'm glad!
 
posted by [identity profile] tiniowien.livejournal.com at 10:31pm on 25/10/2007
Brilliant way to start my morning. Thank you!

And this line: He thought for a second that Dad would be proud, realized the context, and decided that thought could go wherever it was bad, unhelpful thoughts went. had me in hysterics. *g*
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 10:39pm on 25/10/2007
You are very very welcome! Thank you so much for reading and commenting. I'm glad I could make you laugh. The boys are so good to us.
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posted by [personal profile] deanshot1 at 10:43pm on 25/10/2007
I loved every single bit of it. Wonderful story.
Dean's luck was looking up by the end.
I could see that when Sam went into the bathroom after Dean whispered in his ear. Sam is one lucky dude.
Thanks for sharing this.
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 10:46pm on 25/10/2007
Thank you muchly!

Sam is indeed a lucky dude. As is Dean. And we are lucky to have them.
 
posted by [identity profile] batgurl10.livejournal.com at 10:45pm on 25/10/2007
This was awesome! I lurve broke penniless boys--its a thing ok?

This was wonderfully in character and I love love love how possesive dean is with sam. Your story rocked! wish it were longer I really like how you write!
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 10:54pm on 25/10/2007
Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I too have a thing for possessive!Dean.

There're more here (http://rivers-bend.livejournal.com/155524.html), if you want.
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posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 11:18pm on 25/10/2007
You are very welcome! Thank you for reading and commenting :D

I'm so glad you enjoyed the jealous boys. I have to give props to [livejournal.com profile] sylvanwitch for helping polish that part :)
 
posted by [identity profile] timbershiver.livejournal.com at 11:09pm on 25/10/2007
Oh fantastic!

I was just skimming my friends page and laughed at the disclaimer, didn't note the author and clicked the link anyway. I was so happy to see your tree!

So many good bits I could point out, but I love this because it's PWP but without any agression, any angst, just a lovely, frantic piece of sex that only happens when two people who love each other very much are in the mood!

x
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 11:19pm on 25/10/2007
I'm so glad you liked it! Sometimes you just need love and sex. :D

xx
 
posted by [identity profile] tj-smartz.livejournal.com at 11:16pm on 25/10/2007
Fristly, that was, as always, HOT! I love your Dean and Sam, their relationship, their banter and of course their sexing! Secondly, I am reading this at work and there is currently a training session going on just outside my office and I felt mildly filthy reading porn while others learn. It was good *grins*
 
posted by [identity profile] timbershiver.livejournal.com at 11:35pm on 25/10/2007
"there is currently a training session going on just outside my office and I felt mildly filthy reading porn while others learn. It was good *grins*"

LOL, I often have a porn story open when I'm talking to my boss on the phone. All he says is 'blah blah blah blah' and I laugh at the fact that I'm reading something like this while he's moaning about something *really important* that I forgot to do.

Helps me remember that I am my own person, and not a drone.

And as if I'm trusted with anything really important!
 
posted by [identity profile] jacey26.livejournal.com at 11:29pm on 25/10/2007
This was fun! Loved the way you wrote the boys. And the little nuances like this:

"but the thumb that dipped under his collar was pure Sam. Soothing and sexy"

 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 11:54pm on 25/10/2007
Thank you so much! and I always love to hear what parts people like. I'm thrilled you enjoyed it.

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posted by [personal profile] sylvanwitch at 11:30pm on 25/10/2007
Thank gods you finished it as quickly as you promised because what I'd already read was bouncing around in my head doing funny things to my balance all afternoon! *grins*

This is great! I especially like that you don't forget that Dean's in a cast, so we get to watch him figure out what to do with it. And I absolutely LOVE the "we might get caught, be quiet!" kink, since I share it, so it was especially great that I got it not once but TWICE. You rock!

This has me SO ready for tonight's episode and the subtext-that's-really-text. *grins*
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 11:57pm on 25/10/2007
Yay for haunting your afternoon ;) And thank you again for your reassurances and your help. So much appreciated!

I think I have a holdover from my House days. I love to incapacitate Dean somehow. I always seem to be giving the boy stitches or breaking him in some way. Which is odd because both boys are strangely indestructible on the show. ;)

YAY FOR SPN NIGHT!
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posted by [identity profile] merihn.livejournal.com at 11:40pm on 25/10/2007
OH my GOD. *explodes messily* fucking hell that was so hot. I love you.

My GOD. Public sex will never ever not be hot. Fuck. And Sam brushing his cock against Dean's face and saying "Do you want it" oh lord. *passes out*
And Sam holding himself open. Crap. You are pretty much the best EVER.
*flails*
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 11:58pm on 25/10/2007
*loves you too*

I thought if anything could cheer you up it would be some good old fashioned Sam and Dean doing it in public. so I thought I'd better write you some. I am glad it worked for you, honey.

♥♥
 
posted by [identity profile] fromyourashes.livejournal.com at 11:45pm on 25/10/2007
WTF. Dude.

WHY the hell are you trying to KILL ME???
Jesus fucking Christ that was fucking hot with the fuck and the fuck and I have to say lots of filthy fuck.

WOMAN!

Jeez.
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 11:59pm on 25/10/2007
I only try to kill you cos I love you. *kisses*

*g*

glad you liked, honey.

xx
 
posted by [identity profile] dare-to-dream06.livejournal.com at 12:19am on 26/10/2007
"Want it?" Sam said. He stroked its length along Dean's stubble and then pulled back to rub the tip on Dean's lips.

O.O I think I may have a little kink.
Jesus. this was hot and goofy and just great. =)

 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 04:13am on 26/10/2007
I can't tell you how pleased hot and goofy makes me. Thank you so much for reading and leaving happy comments!
 
posted by [identity profile] catcrazy5.livejournal.com at 12:45am on 26/10/2007
Whew! That was hot!
And I have to say that I *love* your disclaimer. I'm one of those who never watched SN until I started reading Wincest fanfic. I do wish that the show spent less time on the strange creatures and the gore, and added more hurt/comfort with the boys, but it is still a pretty interesting series.
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 04:16am on 26/10/2007
I am one of those people two, and now I've bought two series on DVD and watch like a hugely obsessed fan every week. So I'm pretty convinced that my disclaimer is nothing but the truth :)

Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to comment!
 
posted by [identity profile] twasadark.livejournal.com at 01:27am on 26/10/2007
Damn! That was hotness!! Very sexy. Great job!
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 04:16am on 26/10/2007
Thanks so much. I'm glad you liked it :D
 
posted by [identity profile] lady-macbeth-13.livejournal.com at 02:11am on 26/10/2007
This line: He thought for a second that Dad would be proud, realized the context, and decided that thought could go wherever it was bad, unhelpful thoughts went is made of win.

Seriously.

And ohemgee, this was hot.

Also, your disclaimer is gold. And true.
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 04:21am on 26/10/2007
That was one of my favourite lines in the whole fic. I'm so glad you liked it. Thank you!

And yeah. that disclaimer is SO true.
 
posted by [identity profile] crowleyangel.livejournal.com at 02:14am on 26/10/2007
Yippy! Yay! I love the possessive/jealous Dean, you should add onto this fic!
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 04:24am on 26/10/2007
Yay! thank you! I'm so glad you liked it. I love jealous/possessive Dean as well. He's hot. I'm sure the urge for more PWP with the boys will strike some day soon :)
 
posted by [identity profile] lbmisscharlie.livejournal.com at 02:52am on 26/10/2007
HOT. I love how cheeky Dean is, and how he knows Sam so very well in *every* way.
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 04:25am on 26/10/2007
cheeky Dean is love. I'm so glad you liked this. Thank you for reading!
 
posted by [identity profile] glimmerella.livejournal.com at 03:31am on 26/10/2007
Cold shower, please! :)
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 04:26am on 26/10/2007
Yay! cold showers coming up!

Glad you liked :D
 
posted by [identity profile] vanillafluffy.livejournal.com at 05:06am on 26/10/2007
Damn. I needed that!
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 05:08am on 26/10/2007
and you, not even so much for the Wincest! But they're hot. it can't be helped :D

i'm glad I could help!
 
posted by [identity profile] hellspearx17.livejournal.com at 05:12am on 26/10/2007
LOVE! \o/ Quite hot and awesome. I love Dean trying to get Sammy to make suspicious noises with other people nearby. =D

And also, this line?
Dean got his dick right up against Sam's hole, fumbled the open lube between two fingers of his plastered hand, and managed to slick Sam, his good fingers and his cock all at once. "Who 'da man," he muttered.
- Had me CRACKING UP. Oh Dean. =D

+mem!

^_^
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 05:24am on 26/10/2007
Thank you so so much! I cannot tell you how glad I am you cracked up at that line. Because Dean was so pleased with that move, and I wanted to pet him, and OH HE IS LOVE!

And now you probably think I'm completely insane, but they do kinda talk to me when I'm writing :)

and yay for mem! thank you!
 
posted by [identity profile] lima-sierra.livejournal.com at 08:52am on 26/10/2007
You are made of win. This fic is made of win. Your disclaimer is made of win. That is all I can add to my previous squeeing over the filthy banter!sex. Your snarky Dean just gets better and better! Much love for this. *g*
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 02:26pm on 26/10/2007
Yay! I win! :D

i think that is going to be my new disclaimer, though I liked to change it up before. But this one is TRUE, and I LOVE it, and everyone else LOVES it too.

and thank you so much for the help and the SQUEEE!
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