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posted by [personal profile] rivers_bend at 12:02pm on 05/05/2009 under , , ,
This? Also not so much a drabble. I'm hoping that because it's nearly twenty times that long, [profile] lima_sierra and [personal profile] sylvanwitch will forgive me that their prompts got all muddled up.

Title: Cool is Hot
Genre/Pairing: teenchesters Sam/Dean
Words: ~1900
Rating: Adult (sexual situations and language)
Enticements/Warnings: Sam is 16
Summary: It's 104° in the sun with 98% humidity and Sam and Dean are throwing knives at a bale of hay which they had to wrestle onto a stump before they could start, so they have prickly wisps of it stuck to the sweat on their skin, making torture out of extreme discomfort.


Sam is starting to wonder if John Winchester's ability to find the hottest place in the country during the hottest month of the year is a some kind of curse from an evil god, or if he's just trying to kills his sons. Either way, it's 104° in the sun with 98% humidity and he and Dean are throwing knives at a bale of hay which they had to wrestle onto a stump before they could start, so they have prickly wisps of it stuck to the sweat on their skin, making torture out of extreme discomfort.

Sam's usually good with knives—can hold his own against Dean, or even best him—but today it's all he can do to heave the blades the distance, never mind with any accuracy.

"Dude," Dean says, when Sam throws wide and short for the third time in a row, "what the hell are you aiming for?"

"Too hot," Sam mutters, too enervated to elaborate or infuse his voice with the frustration he's feeling.

"Can't pick the weather when you're hunting."

"We're not hunting," Sam argues. "Besides," he adds when Dean gives him his best stern look, "how often do we hunt in the middle of the day?"

Dean tosses the remaining knife in his hand to thunk into the center of their hand-drawn bulls eye, then jerks his head in the direction of the oak tree at the edge of the yard. "Sit," he says. "I'll get us a drink."

Sam feels immediately better getting out of the sun, but the relief is short-lived as he acclimates to the still-stifling shade. He glares at the house, wishing, not for the first time this week, that they were staying in a motel, somewhere with air-conditioning, and maybe even a pool. That's typical Dad, too. Washington State in September, 72 degrees for a week, they're in a motel with weather stripping and a working thermostat, but January in South Dakota, they're in a cabin with a broken window and nothing but a fireplace. And now they're in Louisiana in the middle of August without so much as a creek within walking distance.

When Dean comes out the back door, he looks like a waiter at some tropical beach resort in the movies. He's taken off his shirt and exchanged his safety-conscious jeans and boots for the too-small board shorts they found in a drawer two motels back. The pair they argue over because they're cooler than cut off jeans, even though they are covered in bright blue hibiscus print, and both boys agree they're hideous. In one hand he has a large bottle of iced tea, and balanced in the other, two glasses filled with ice.

If Dean were a waiter, Sam would so totally tip him with his room key. Not if it were as hot as it is here, though. Except his room would probably have air-conditioning… Sam stops himself before he gets too carried away. He's stuck here; nothing he can do about it.

Except he doesn't have to be wearing so many clothes. He strips off his own shirt and moves on to unlacing his boots. By the time Dean crosses the yard with his burdens, Sam's down to his boxers.

"Dad's due back any time," Dean says, as he's sitting down. Like he's just mentioning it, not like he's warning Sam not to start anything, though Sam is pretty sure that's what Dean's getting at.

Sam relieves him of the glasses so Dean can sit and, more importantly, pour the tea, and they both down their first round in almost a single gulp. When he's done, Sam presses the cold glass to his forehead and the back of his neck and then pours a second glass. He's not paying much attention to his brother, focusing on rehydrating and not dying of sunstroke, so the ice cube on the back of his neck comes as a shock.

Dean chuckles as Sam nearly jumps out of his skin, but doesn't remove it; he runs it slowly across Sam's shoulders, and then, when Sam leans into it, down his spine.

"Feel good?" Dean asks, voice low and rough, words and tone the same as when he rocks his knuckles up behind Sam's balls, teasing and maddening, and perfect.

The sound Sam makes would best be described as a whimper, which some days Dean might tease him about, but at the moment he's too busy running the quickly melting ice up Sam's back and around to the hollow of his throat, then following the ice with his tongue.

"Dean," Sam says, all too aware that they're sitting in full view of the house's parking spot and that Dad is going to be back sometime this afternoon.

But Dean doesn't stop, despite the fact that three minutes ago he was the one warning Sam they couldn't do this. Instead, he scoops another cube from his glass and starts running it down Sam's chest. The ice is melting quickly on Sam's over-heated skin, sending rivulets of water to tickle their way around his nipples and over his abs. "Dean," he says again, begging now, for Dean to stop, or keep going; he's not even sure.

When Dean leans even closer, blowing a stream of air over Sam's collar bones, Sam tries to kiss him, but Dean dodges his lips and licks a drip of water off Sam's biceps instead. Sam can feel his skin twitching under the cold of the ice, the heat of Dean's tongue, and the press of the thick summer air. There's a tent in his boxers that would make him fit right in with the cast of the Hot College Boys porn he watched last time Dad took Dean on a hunt and left him behind, and a glance reveals Dean shifting uncomfortably in his own clinging shorts.

"You need some cooling off there yourself?" Sam asks, aiming for teasing, but sounding more breathlessly hopeful than anything.

Dean nods, and Sam dips two ice cubes out of his glass, running one up the side of Dean's neck and the other clumsily down Dean's chest and stomach towards the waistband of his shorts. The thrill that shivers though his brother makes Sam smile, and getting payback, Sam licks along the shining cool path the ice left behind Dean's ear.

"Jesus," Dean says, and his shiver is less subtle this time. When Sam follows the lick with a nip and then a sucking kiss to the salty skin, Dean gives up the pretense that they're not really doing this and grabs at Sam's shoulders with cold fingers and hot palms, shoving Sam away only far enough so that he can pull him in and kiss his mouth.

Sam falls on his brother, pushing him onto the grass under the tree and rolling them so Dean's on top, hot and heavy like a steam blanket, but Sam doesn't care anymore about the weather or the lack of air conditioning, because Dean is kissing him, making soft, hungry noises into his mouth, pinning one wrist above Sam's head, and tipping sideways so he can wedge his other hand between them, in through the fly of Sam's boxers, wrapping that hand—fingers still chilled from the ice—around Sam's dick, pulling, stopping, moving down to cup Sam's balls, press up behind them, then back again to jerk him, rock against Sam's hip, the whole time moaning into Sam's mouth.

Sam is close—so close—about to come all over Dean's hand, when Dean practically leaps off him, swearing like he got shot, or stung by a bee.

"Dean?" Sam's pissed and frustrated, but mostly worried.

"Dad," Dean hisses, just as Sam hears the Impala's engine, the sound of the tires on the gravel drive that curls around the side of the house to the parking area at the back. The one they're sitting twenty feet from.

Sam manages to get upright and pull his t-shirt over to cover where his dick is poking out of his fly just in time before Dad pulls up. Dean has his back to the driveway, between Sam and the car, and he's trying to adjust himself in the restrictive and revealing shorts, muttering something Sam can't hear.

"Boys!" Dad calls across the yard. "Come help me get this stuff in the house."

Fortunately, Dad doesn't wait for them to answer, just heads inside with a box he hefted from the back seat, so Sam can carefully tuck himself away and gingerly pull his jeans on, only wondering a little bit if it would help to press a glass of half-melted ice to his crotch.

"I knew we shouldn't start anything," Dean mutters, looking woefully at Sam and adjusting himself one more time before heading towards the car.

"You blaming me?" This is so very much not Sam's fault that it isn't even funny.

"You started it, being all hot and sweaty." Dean's serious tone is belied by the substance of his complaint, so Sam doesn't bother arguing further. Just as well. Too hot to argue. Curse Dad's timing.

They lug the other three boxes and two bags into the house. As they're settling the second load in the corner behind the easy chair where Dad had started a pile, Dad calls from the back of the house, "Need a shower. You boys decide what you want for dinner."

"Okay," Dean answers, the dutiful son, but he's already got Sam by the wrist, dragging him back into the yard and around to the other side of the oak—the side that can't be seen from the house.

"Quick," he says to Sam, who doesn't need to be told twice; he's already ripping open the buttons on his jeans as Dean drops to his knees, undoing his own fly and sighing as he frees his cock.

One hand on Sam's waist, the other on his own dick, Dean kisses, then licks, then sucks Sam's, coughing when Sam jerks at the sensation, but then finding a rhythm that works for them both. When Dean comes, a gob lands on Sam's foot, and Sam would laugh, but he's too busy coming himself, forearm stuffed in his mouth so he doesn't shout. Dean starts to stand, but Sam folds, pushing him back down, and then farther, so they're both lying in the grass again.

"We're in a hurry," Dean whispers, but he doesn't protest further when Sam kisses him.

"Just want a kiss," Sam says once he's gotten what he wanted.

They kiss for another minute, maybe two, and then reluctantly get up, dress, and gather the glasses, tea, and throwing knives—more because it will give them an excuse for being outside if Dad catches them than anything else.

"He'll be gone again in three days," Dean promises in a whisper as they bend down to pick up the last of the knives. "Two whole days to ourselves."

Sam looks at the way Dean's muscles move—and the way his lips pout and his hipbones jut over the top of the shorts Dean's wearing—and just hopes he can wait that long.
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posted by [identity profile] drvsilla.livejournal.com at 07:25pm on 05/05/2009
Ngh. Very hot. Denial, risk, Dad interruption, quick fix within earshot-- okay yes, count me in, tyvm. ;]

It's always a pleasure how enmeshed with their 'ordinary lives' [if you will] them being together can me, just another part of what they are and have to do. As are all the things that ramble thorough Sam's mind, about this life and Dean, and then his getting that kiss. Oh for those two days to be now.

<3
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 07:46pm on 05/05/2009
I love that about them too. this is what they do. Practice throwing knives and make out under oak trees in overwhelming heat. And all that other stuff, too :D

It makes me very gleeful that you like this. Thank you!

And oh, indeed. I want those two days to be now as much as Sam does, I think.

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posted by [identity profile] gestaltrose.livejournal.com at 07:37pm on 05/05/2009
hot and lovely honey!
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 07:46pm on 05/05/2009
:D

thank you!
 
posted by [identity profile] willow-fae-20.livejournal.com at 08:03pm on 05/05/2009
Okay, so...

First: THIS!!!!! THANK YOU.

Second: MOAR PLZ?!?!?!?!

Third: *makes grabby hands at your icon*

 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 08:10pm on 05/05/2009
1. You're welcome! And thank YOU! :D

2. This probably would fit in with my standford verse (http://rivers-bend.livejournal.com/259596.html) pre-series fics. And there will probably be more pre-series boys once this semester is over. Knowing me, and knowing how Kripke will leave me in the throes of canon angst.

3. The toe icon or the amazing sketch by [livejournal.com profile] trolleys icon?
 
posted by [identity profile] rejeneration.livejournal.com at 08:04pm on 05/05/2009
Eeeeeeee. God, I even though the day was unbearably hot, the porn managed to supersede! ♥ First porn I've read in ages and it was just AWESOME, honey! Thinking about you today!
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 08:13pm on 05/05/2009
Thank you, sweetie! I'm thrilled the porn managed to out-hot a Louisiana summer :D



have fun tonight!
 
posted by [identity profile] veritas-st.livejournal.com at 08:06pm on 05/05/2009
Perfect. Love desperate boys hiding from John.

Love it

x
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 01:31am on 06/05/2009
Yay, Thank you!. I'm glad the boys hiding pleased you.

And LOL at your icon :D :D
 
posted by [identity profile] alasse.livejournal.com at 08:08pm on 05/05/2009
OH MAN. This was so hot, and really hazy and vivid - exacly like the hot summer day the boys are stuck in. I loved how you mixed tenderness along with pure almost philistine pleasure - Dean taking care of Sam, Sam taking care of him back, but taking advantage of the sheer hotness of the circumstances. And, eeep! Having to stop because of John and then stealing a few minutes anyway was really great.
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 01:33am on 06/05/2009
thank you so much! I'm glad the tenderness came through the porniness; that's one of my favourite things about this pairing, how they are in love and obsessed at the same time.
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posted by [personal profile] sylvanwitch at 08:12pm on 05/05/2009
I couldn't wait, so I'm actually commenting as our very nice maintenance guy cleans my room. (Thank gods for small fonts--lol!) What a gorgeous, hot, filty (as in dirty, dust, whatever--so I have a kink about dirt...*grins*), perfect story. I ADORE the element of Dad catching them, the added danger of him discovering them behind the oak at the end an even better atmosphere for their behavior, and the delayed promise of more to come also providing tension. That's really freakin' brilliant, and I LOVE it.

Bravo! And thank you so much for writing this, hon :-) *hugs*
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 08:16pm on 05/05/2009
my grin is huge and aching my cheeks! I'm over the moon that this fits the bill for you. It's hard to keep track of who likes/tolerates John nearly catching them, and who can't stand it, but I thought I remembered you were in the okay with it group :D

yay yay yay! I'm just so glad you like it!
 
posted by [identity profile] dreamlittleyo.livejournal.com at 10:46pm on 05/05/2009
*adores*
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 01:33am on 06/05/2009
Thank you. And also, thank you :D

*adores YOU*
 
posted by [identity profile] jumpuphigh.livejournal.com at 10:59pm on 05/05/2009
Yummalicious!
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 01:34am on 06/05/2009
Thank you! Glad you liked!
 
posted by [identity profile] cocoaphonic.livejournal.com at 11:13pm on 05/05/2009
Oh my, this was the perfect thing to read before bed! ... or maybe not, because now I won't be able to sleep, but who cares? It made me feel all warm and happy despite the fact that it's 10C, windy and rainy outside.
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 01:35am on 06/05/2009
I'm so glad I could make you warm and happy despite the weather :D

thank you!

and KITTENNNNNNNNNN!
 
posted by [identity profile] tiffosis.livejournal.com at 11:19pm on 05/05/2009
it would seem so cliche to say how hot that was, but a spade is spade!

HOT!!
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 01:35am on 06/05/2009
\o/

Hot is what I was aiming for. Thank you!
 
posted by [identity profile] itsthedetails.livejournal.com at 01:47am on 06/05/2009
I love them all hot and sweaty, especially when they need each other so much they have to touch right where they are outside. Dean's Hawaiian printed shorts should be a amusing but thinking of him all glistening with sweat in too small shorts is HOT!

This whole thing is Mmm, Mmm good.
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 01:49am on 06/05/2009
Dean's Hawaiian printed shorts should be a amusing but thinking of him all glistening with sweat in too small shorts is HOT!

I am so glad you said that! Because I was trying to make them funny, but in my head he was just smokin' in them, no matter what I did :D :D

So glad you liked! Thank you :D
 
posted by [identity profile] ilovesn.livejournal.com at 02:15am on 06/05/2009
mmmmm... smexy :D

thanks for sharing ;D
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 07:12am on 06/05/2009
You are most welcome! Thank YOU for reading! :D
 
posted by [identity profile] deansam67.livejournal.com at 02:29am on 06/05/2009
Guh. I love your porn. LOVE IT. :D
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 07:14am on 06/05/2009
yay! Thank you sweetie! I'm so glad :D :D
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posted by [identity profile] larienelengasse.livejournal.com at 02:29am on 06/05/2009
ROWR. That was smokin'... especially being interrupted and having to cover. And the whole thing with the ice? MMMMmmmmm...
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 07:16am on 06/05/2009
:D :D Thank you! I'm glad the ice worked for you *g*
 
posted by [identity profile] adelheide.livejournal.com at 02:43am on 06/05/2009
Nnnngggghhhh!

Tdka didsa mislke sonu blotecki!!
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 07:16am on 06/05/2009
The nnngggghhh part I get! :D

thank you!
 
posted by [identity profile] ilikecrystals.livejournal.com at 03:10am on 06/05/2009
Ice and hot Winchester Boys. A match made in heaven! Wahoo! That was awesome! *fans self*
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 07:17am on 06/05/2009
It's hard to go wrong with ice and hot Winchesters, it's true :D

Thank you!
 
posted by [identity profile] i-am-negotiable.livejournal.com at 03:39am on 06/05/2009
How hott and lovely! Ahhhhh! Just what I needed to unwind from stress from finals.

Is there a full sketch to that icon of yours, btw? Just a question...
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 07:10am on 06/05/2009
Thank you! And yes, It was a lovely way to unwind from the stress of studying for my finals to write it :D

there is a full sketch, and it's even more gorgeous. [livejournal.com profile] trolleys drew it for me from a prompt I gave her in her [livejournal.com profile] oddments journal. I don't seem to have a working link, but it's this:
Image
 
posted by [identity profile] kiraynn.livejournal.com at 04:14am on 06/05/2009
incredibly hot! I love it when they have to hide from John, but still can't help but do naughty things when he's somewhere close by ;)
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 02:13pm on 06/05/2009
Thank you! :D

I have to admit I, too, love the idea that they just can't keep their hands off each other. ;)
 
posted by [identity profile] sanann.livejournal.com at 04:52am on 06/05/2009
oh yeah.
I love your details and the way you write them, young and horny and hopeful.
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 02:14pm on 06/05/2009
thank you so much!
 
posted by [identity profile] lexii314.livejournal.com at 05:20am on 06/05/2009
So very, very H.O.T!!!
Loved it!Thank you.
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 02:15pm on 06/05/2009
You're welcome. and thank YOU! :D
 
posted by [identity profile] duskshadows.livejournal.com at 06:52am on 06/05/2009
murfl.
makes me fan myself even though it's freezing in here. hoooboy that was good!
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 02:15pm on 06/05/2009
*helps fan*

Thank you! glad it hit the spot :D
 
posted by [identity profile] space-raider182.livejournal.com at 07:25am on 06/05/2009
Hells yes. Very hot, especially with the looming risk of Dad in the background the entire time. Hehe, and I love the pretense Dean put up that he and Sammy weren't actually gonna do anything. Ha, oh, Dean. But dear God, the decription of these boys, even underage, sliding ice cubes down each other's bods was so freaking hot. And then, it got sweet and cutesy at the end with Sammy shoving Dean down for some kisses. Aw... and yet still unbelievably yum.
Love it
xoxo
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 02:29pm on 06/05/2009
Thank you! I'm so glad you love it! I'm always thrilled to hear what people enjoy.
 
posted by [identity profile] orphan-project.livejournal.com at 07:36am on 06/05/2009
-spazzy flail- This was wonderful. Perfect bed time story. :3
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 03:09pm on 06/05/2009
yay, thank you! I'm so glad you liked it :D
 
posted by [identity profile] ash48.livejournal.com at 09:48am on 06/05/2009
Oh. Just wonderful. The tension of them being caught adding to the tension of the moment and then Sam wondering if he can hold out until next time days away.

*guh*
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 03:09pm on 06/05/2009
:D :D

So glad you enjoyed it! Thank you *g*
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