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posted by [personal profile] rivers_bend at 11:00am on 02/05/2007 under
I've been having trouble with my writing mojo recently and decided I should write a flash fic. The ever helpful [livejournal.com profile] tigertrapped gave me the prompt Another Country from this week's WriteWords Challenge.

For [livejournal.com profile] victorian_tweed who is after me to write my memoirs. When I was sixteen I went to Nicaragua for three weeks on a youth group trip.

Thank you to [livejournal.com profile] karaokegal and [livejournal.com profile] tigertrapped for very necessary beta.

general rated 315 words.


I've been home less than 24 hours and the fluorescent lights of the store hurt my eyes. There is at least a mile of breakfast cereal, every color, every flavor, every grain and chemical imaginable, ready to be tossed into your cart, taken home and poured into a bowl with milk fresh from the fridge. Teeny tiny chocolate chip cookies, Fruity Pebbles, Captain Crunch, breakfast with marshmallows. Five dollars a box.

Each one an assault on my senses. Something so commonplace has become a total shock after only three weeks away, where breakfast was an egg that came from a chicken and not a carton, and then only because I was a guest. Every day after that, breakfast was a tortilla with a smear of beans.

Three weeks in a country my government told me was violent, backwards and evil, where the most frightening thing I saw were the guards at our American Embassy, armed with machine guns and scowls. In a country where the dangerous rebels were teachers daring to increase the literacy rate.

The packages of meat, cut off the bone, skinless, wrapped in plastic on Styrofoam trays, are a far cry from the half a chicken, bones and all, that turned up on your plate at every restaurant, always cooked the same way. Options were limited: chicken or fish. No lamb chops, pork tenderloin, baby-back ribs. Just expensive protein served up for tourists, whose dollars, according to the rumors, went to buy guns. I saw no evidence of that.

'Welcome home,' my mother said, 'I just need to run to the store, pick up something for dinner. Anything you'd like.' And she meant it. Vegetables and fruit from every season and every part of the globe. Acres of choices, packaged and processed, served up to the happy consumer.

This is America. Land of the free. There's nothing you can't have here. Except your self-respect.
There are 16 comments on this entry. (Reply.)
 
posted by [identity profile] tigertrapped.livejournal.com at 10:10am on 02/05/2007
I love this even more now I know it's a glimpse into your past. *g* The title, by the way, is sheer genius.
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 10:13am on 02/05/2007
Hence the 'not really a fic' thing :) I will never ever forget that feeling of shock at the sight of the cereal aisle, which even in comparason to the UK seems to go on forever, with so many choices that if they weren't all so filled with sugar and artificial colours and horror, it would be impossible to choose.
 
posted by [identity profile] therosewilde.livejournal.com at 10:24am on 02/05/2007
Wow.
 
posted by [identity profile] lima-sierra.livejournal.com at 10:28am on 02/05/2007
Wow. I really got the sense of your culture shock reading that. You should write more of these! No sign of any mojo-loss here, girl. *claps*
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 10:43am on 02/05/2007
Thank you. I'm so glad the culture shock came across finally. I was having some trouble with that.

*calls to mojo*
 
posted by [identity profile] karaokegal.livejournal.com at 06:14pm on 02/05/2007
Sheer brilliance and Mr. Mojo is definitely rising.
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 06:18pm on 02/05/2007
Why thank you :) and thank you for helping me see the bits that weren't working.
 
posted by [identity profile] diachrony.livejournal.com at 11:27pm on 02/05/2007
Really good. The sense of being overwhelmed really struck me.
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 11:38am on 03/05/2007
Thank you! I was definately wanting to get that feeling across, just that too damn much feeling.
 
posted by [identity profile] silsbee329.livejournal.com at 02:33am on 03/05/2007
where the most frightening thing I saw were the guards at our American Embassy, armed with machine guns and scowls

This is a powerful little piece. We do take a hell of a lot for granted...
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 11:39am on 03/05/2007
Thank you. I wonder sometimes if my absolute horror of guns in real life comes back to seeing all those armed guards who looked like they would shoot at anything that so much as breathed.
 
posted by [identity profile] vanillafluffy.livejournal.com at 04:15am on 03/05/2007
*winces at yesterday's Wal*mart comment* Wow.
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 11:41am on 03/05/2007
Ah, but I left out the part where three years later I was moaning to anyone who'd listen about the lack of choice in the cereal aisle at a UK supermarket. Hell hath no fury like a disillusioned 16 year old girl.
 
posted by [identity profile] victorian-tweed.livejournal.com at 11:36am on 03/05/2007
Absolutely perfect example of why I think you should write your memoirs, darling. Fascinating and beautifully written!!

Thank you so much for sharing these moments of your life. *long hugs of gratitude*
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 11:42am on 03/05/2007
Thank you, and you're welcome *g*

I still have to finish my summer camp memories for you, don't I?
 
posted by [identity profile] victorian-tweed.livejournal.com at 06:14am on 08/05/2007
I still have to finish my summer camp memories for you, don't I?
Please Miss, may I have some more?

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