posted by [identity profile] lima-sierra.livejournal.com at 10:27am on 07/02/2007
I did have two agendas posting Nate's story first. 1)Lure people in with porn ...

*little lima!fish flaps hopelessly on the end of the porn hook*

She envisioned a pond and smoothed the surface in her mind. Eyes closed, she brought in winter and lay a thickening of ice over the surface ... The ice shattered and her tears started.

Awed. Completely. How you ever came up with this analogy is completely beyond me, but it captured her pain perfectly. It was great to read both sides to this story and to see the conflict facing the two characters.
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 11:04am on 07/02/2007
*g* never mind maggots, porn is the best bait ever!

I'm not actually sure how I came up with the analogy either. Just one of those things that is who Rachel is. It's one of the things that I love about writing, that sometimes the characters just talk to me and tell me what to say.

I'm glad you liked this bit too, even though there was no boy!porn in it.
 
posted by [identity profile] lima-sierra.livejournal.com at 11:17am on 07/02/2007
I do like well-written porn-free fic too y'know. No, really, I do. *g*

*imagines river raising an eyebrow in mock disbelief*
 
posted by [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com at 11:24am on 07/02/2007
No, I do believe you actually, because I'm the same way. I'm all for slash and porn, but I do love well-written genfic too. *g*

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